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Deep Dark Woods - Gojyo - G

May 03, 2008 23:22

Title: Deep Dark Woods
Author: giving_ground
Warnings: Worksafe.
Notes: Challenge #7: ghosts. Just under 35 minutes taken. A young Gojyo, alone in the woods.

( Deep Dark Woods )

char:gojyo, author:giving_ground, challenge:ghosts, rating:g

Comments 26

missingkitsune May 3 2008, 22:51:38 UTC

wow good story. poor little gojyo felling so unwanted *pats gojyo* sounds pretty much IC to me. and you did a great job.

giving_ground May 5 2008, 06:04:38 UTC

Thank you very much. :)

clytemnaestra May 3 2008, 23:25:34 UTC

I really like this line:
If there are any ghosts here they're only the ones that came along with him from home,

Very nicely done! Tiny Gojyo is so vulnerable and yet so stubborn.

giving_ground May 5 2008, 06:04:57 UTC

Thanks! Glad you liked it.

annotated_em May 4 2008, 00:33:01 UTC

*pets wee!Gojyo* Poor kid, having to dare himself because the other kids won't even have that much to do with him.

giving_ground May 5 2008, 06:05:47 UTC

little!Gojyo needs lots of big hugs. Only he won't admit it.

despina_moon May 4 2008, 00:34:36 UTC

Wah! This story hurts. Poor, abused and ignored Gojyo. Very well done, as always.

giving_ground May 5 2008, 06:06:13 UTC

Thank you very much! :)

eyesofshinigami May 4 2008, 04:10:55 UTC

I don't have an angsty!Gojyo icon, so I'll have to settle for Sanzo. XD

Oh, this story hurt so good. I wanted to take little Gojyo and hug him tightly. You captured him so beautifully. The emotions were running high through the whole thing. However, it was the last line that really, really caught me.

So well done. Thank you! ♥

giving_ground May 5 2008, 06:06:57 UTC

Thank you ever so much! :)