Comments | saiyuki_time: 'Dead Weight', Gojyo/Hakkai, pg-13

clytemnaestra in saiyuki_time

'Dead Weight', Gojyo/Hakkai, pg-13

Apr 30, 2008 20:35

Title: Dead Weight (pardon the bad pun)
Author: clytemnaestra
Warnings: Worksafe, but Hakkai is creepy. Definite creepiness and sexual suggestions.
Pairing(s): Gojyo/Hakkai, but not explicit.
Notes: Challenge #7 (wow, we're up to 7 already?)
I really didn't mean to write creepy, angst-filled Hakkai...and then I did. Sorry. And yet again, I can't really write ( Read more... )

author:clytemnestra, pair:gojyo/hakkai, char:gojyo, char:hakkai, challenge:ghosts

Comments 22

erinmacha May 1 2008, 04:26:59 UTC

*smiles* Okay, so yes, that was a very creepy thought(s), Hakkai.

I am glad Gojyo did manage to finally come up with something witty to say. LOL...the threesum with Sanzo....*is still snickering*

clytemnaestra May 1 2008, 04:50:39 UTC

hehe, I think my temptation to write something threesome-y for the upcoming 5/3/08 day is showing...^_^

and yes, Hakkai is very creepy.

theskywasblue May 1 2008, 04:44:48 UTC

Hakkai is creepy, but their conversation seems perfectly in character.
I found this line particularly amusing What the fuck do I say to that? Yeah, that's really messed-up Hakkai, you're creepin' me out and can we please go to bed.
hehe...

clytemnaestra May 1 2008, 04:52:03 UTC

hehe, thanks :)

cicer May 1 2008, 05:33:27 UTC

Ahh! I love this. It's completely morbid and completely sweet at the same time, which is so not easy to do! I adore Gojyo's responses. They really made me smile. Ack, how can a story about dragging around dead bodies be so endearing?! This is great.

clytemnaestra May 2 2008, 02:49:31 UTC

haha, Thank you~! I'm glad you enjoyed my creepy/sweet story, that's kindof what I was going for (and entirely how I see Gojyo/Hakkai: messed up, but adorable) ^_^

eyesofshinigami May 1 2008, 05:51:24 UTC

Only Hakkai could make such comments about dead bodies...but I really do like the symbolism that you used. It was all very IC.

And maybe it was just me, but the line about him finding dragging around Gonou's weight dreadfully irritating made me giggle like mad. It was so very Hakkai in it's execution.

Nice little story. I enjoyed it muchly. ♥

clytemnaestra May 2 2008, 02:48:31 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad that you were amused by that line, I was too ^_^

invadermcflyer May 1 2008, 15:14:21 UTC

Hakkai's so wonderful at being freaky. That was really funny though. I laughed at almost everything Hakkai said about the dragging. And that was so like Gojyo to add humour to Hakkai's creepy thoughts. They're both mental and funny. Wonderful piece!

clytemnaestra May 2 2008, 02:47:56 UTC

I'm so glad that you found it funny as well! I was worried that no one else would get a laugh out of Hakkai's freakiness :D