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Addiction - PG (5th Challenge)

Apr 22, 2008 16:00

Title: Addiction (I’m original or what?)
Author: Lauand
Beta: Macavitykitsune
Warning: Worksafe
Pairings: Gojyo/Hakkai implications. Maybe some 39-ness if you look at it the right way.
Summary: Goku is curious. Hakkai is subtle.
Prompt: 5th Challenge: Addiction - 30 min.
A/N: 36 minutes to write this plus some time editing. I win! (EDIT: I've just seen ( Read more... )

challenge:addiction, pair:gojyo/hakkai, author:lauand, rating:pg

Comments 22

white_cross_b April 22 2008, 14:15:02 UTC

This is so good! You have a fantastic grasp of the language, so no worries there AT ALL. Smart and very funny! Thank you for sharing!

lauand April 22 2008, 18:26:09 UTC

Thank you!

I'm always afraid when I border crack, it's a very difficult genre and quite easy to write crap and lack originality. So I'm glad you think I've managed.

Thanks to you for reading and commenting!

(Yours may not be the most beautiful icon in the world, but it always makes me smile everytime I see it. Lovely.)

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lauand April 22 2008, 18:27:37 UTC

Yes, I wasn't too sure it the point was clear enough... but I enjoy more the things that take me more than a second to fully understand.

Glad you liked it! ^^

bunnysquee April 22 2008, 15:47:43 UTC

ooo ... fun! i love sanzo's reaction to goku's declaration that he is goku's addiction, and i love that goku and hakkai both know that gojyo is in denial.

cute little fic - thank you for writing.

lauand April 22 2008, 18:31:21 UTC

Everybody knows he's in denial, dammit! Millions of fangirls can't be wrong! And as I once read from Helena Handbasket (I think it was her that said it), a guy that tilts his hips as pronouncedly and as often as Gojyo does, can't be straight. I support her opinion.

Thank you for reading and commenting!

invadermcflyer April 22 2008, 19:49:42 UTC

HAHA!Oh my god! I really love this! I was laughing like a freak along with Goku! And Hakkai's reply immediately after Sanzo's violent reaction was perfect! Awesome piece

lauand April 23 2008, 13:55:06 UTC

Thank you! I wasn't too sure about this one, so I'm glad you think it worked out fine.

Thanks again for your comment!

(Great icon, by the way)

louiselux April 22 2008, 20:21:58 UTC

Hee hee! That was sweet and made me smile so much.

Sorry I didn't answer your query before, but I got really busy. It all seems to have worked out okay though... I hope?

lauand April 23 2008, 14:00:15 UTC

Thanks to you for this comm. It's a great source of wonderful ficlets and it spurs me to write more often. So thank you.

Don't worry. I was just a bit troubled thinking that maybe you hadn't received the message, since I've never used that LJ service and I didn't know how it worked, but then I thought that I could include a short note in an ordinary post and that it wouldn't be bothersome to anyone. No luck for the moment, though, nobody loves meeeeee...!