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Little Hairs

Apr 11, 2008 00:11

Title: Little Hairs
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author:invadermcflyer, pair:gojyo/hakkai, challenge:opposites

Comments 11

eyesofshinigami April 10 2008, 20:05:19 UTC

Heee! That was very cute. I kind of like the idea of Gojyo being all bleary-eyed and not being a morning person. It was adorable.

I liked the contrast, and how Gojyo slowly realized what Hakkai was talking about. Very nice. ^___^ And you didn't butcher the characters! *thwaps*

I thought this was a nice little story. Thank you for sharing it!

invadermcflyer April 11 2008, 11:28:02 UTC

Ohhmmmhaha! Heheh. I sometimes get ahead of myself and write like a maniac. And when I reread it,I realise they sound like my mental fangirl!
*thwaped* ouchie. Haha!

Seeing that Gojyo's such an active bug at night, I thought muahahha, he ought to be really bushed in the mornings! Yeah, Gojyo's all foggy in the morning but Hakkai loves him so and simply can't resist teasing him whenever he gets the opportunity.
YAY! Thanks for the comment!

(Hmm did I double post?)

purpleicicles April 10 2008, 20:59:40 UTC

Heh, Gojyo is sooo not awake in the mornings!! I love how Hakkai is already up to speed and teasing the kappa! X)

invadermcflyer April 11 2008, 11:34:02 UTC

Haha! I always thought Gojyo would make a lousy morning person. And yeah Hakkai just loves the Kappa too much to leave him and his morning brain alone!
Thanks for the comment!

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invadermcflyer April 11 2008, 11:44:51 UTC

Phew. I thought I did! Sometimes, my fangirl reacts faster than my brain and completely takes over the characters. And they all end up sounding like me! IRK.
Heheh. You me and Gojyo then! And Hakkai's an all day kind of person! He's rather sharp I feel.

Thanks for the comment!

theskywasblue April 11 2008, 01:06:41 UTC

That was very cute. I don't think you butchered them at all.
Liked it!

invadermcflyer April 11 2008, 11:48:29 UTC

Haha! Ah relief! Thanks, I really thought I did. I'm glad you like!Hehe.
Thanks for the comment!

clytemnaestra April 11 2008, 02:30:23 UTC

this was fun! and yes, I can definitely see Hakkai waking up and being awake and cheerful right as soon as he opens his eyes ^_^

invadermcflyer April 11 2008, 11:52:19 UTC

I had a running mental image while writing and it was quite amusing. Heheh. Yeah, Hakkai's definitely a morning person!

Thanks for the comment!