Comments | saiyuki_time: The Woman in Bed With Us, Gojyo/Hakkai, PG-13

kubaru_suki in saiyuki_time

The Woman in Bed With Us, Gojyo/Hakkai, PG-13

Apr 08, 2008 15:26

Title: The Woman in Bed With Us
Author: Kubaru Suki
Prompt: #3, Post Coital
Rating: PG-13-mostly for language.
Pairings: 858 as well as the Cho-siblings.
Time: 51:31

Author's Notes: There are times when I think I should get, like, help.

( The Woman in Bed With Us )

pair:gojyo/hakkai, pair:gonou/kanan, challenge:post coital, rating:pg-13, author:kubaru_suki

Comments 13

chomiji April 8 2008, 20:41:40 UTC

Oh!

Oh! I liked that! I kept smiling, over and over, and then at the end, my eyes teared up. Thank you!

louiselux April 8 2008, 20:46:38 UTC

That was awesome.

*dabs eyes*

puddingcat April 8 2008, 20:57:51 UTC

That's just gorgeous. The progression feels completely natural,a nd the last scene brought a lump to my throat.

lechymonk April 8 2008, 21:45:06 UTC

I hope I'm hitting the right keys cause I can hardly see through my tears. So sweet, so sad but wonderful that they got to live to a nice age and got to stay together. And how like Gojyo at the end, to know that they will be together once more.

kerumica April 8 2008, 22:54:06 UTC

Oh wow, what a great story! I was looking for something sweet and touching to end out my day and I totally found it. And the ending was perfect :)