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jedishampoo in saiyuki_time

Pointy Things, 53

Apr 02, 2008 23:12

Title: Pointy Things ( Read more... )

challenge:post coital, pair:gojyo/sanzo, challenge:unexplored territory, author:jedishampoo, rating:r

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jedishampoo April 3 2008, 20:58:11 UTC

Thank you much! It didn't quite turn out how I wanted, but this deadline thing ws a fun challenge. :)

cheydancer April 3 2008, 12:19:53 UTC

LoL. I loved the conversation and the image of Sanzou all Mary Poppins-like pulling objects from his robe. He never *did* answer about the beer. :D

jedishampoo April 3 2008, 20:58:40 UTC

I'm assuming he had one in there. Thank you so much! :)

befanini April 3 2008, 12:50:02 UTC

EXCELLENT interpretation of the prompt!!! They are very in-character, it's very "visual" to read (and reminds me of animegher's awesome art XD XD) - I especially love your description of Sanzo gracefully tossing the lighter: I can see that SO clearly in my mind. ♥

jedishampoo April 3 2008, 21:00:52 UTC

OMG that mini-comic is PRICELESS. Thank you for the link! And thank you for your words (squee!)! This one-hour writing thing is TOUGH.

befanini April 4 2008, 17:32:56 UTC

Isn't it??? XD XD XD You're welcome, and be sure to check the rest of her stuff out. (Like you haven't already... hehehe)

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jedishampoo April 3 2008, 21:01:54 UTC

Thank you very much! I almost called it "interdimensional vortex" but stopped myself just in time. :)

elfen April 3 2008, 22:47:20 UTC

I think we should just call them Sanzo's robes of holding. Damn, but that was funny. You always seem him in the anime reaching into his sleeve and pulling all this stuff out. I can just imagine what would happen if he was jumped before he could undress. Great fic.

jedishampoo April 4 2008, 03:50:24 UTC

"Robes of Holding!" A mystical object obtained from one of the Buddhist Temples? Hee! Thanks so much for commenting!