Challenge 56: "Bound", gen, PG

[samsarapine]

Title: Bound
Author: samsarapine
Rating: PG
Warnings: Mention of child slavery.
Pairing: None
Notes: Challenge 56: No dialogue. 40 minutes allowed. Written in 37 minutes, but it took another five to read over it and clean it up, so I think I'm technically over the allowed time limit.

Concrit welcome.

Comments

[whymzycal]

I think this is lovely, tricksy "gray areas" or no (they're seamless). The description of Jeep's transformation is wonderful.

[lady_ganesh]

Nice!

[purpleicicles]

You did a fantastic job, what on earth are you worrying about?!? :D Particularly loved the line An aerial roll, two and suddenly, the driver was there, eyes opened wide and with a shoulder easily broad enough to clasp and hold, because this driver must never leave. because it sounds very... jeep.

[opalmatrix]

I liked that very much! And I have to agree, the transformation bit is really striking and well-written.