Creative "First Time" Title Goes Here

[andmydog]

Title: First Time
Author: andmydog
Warnings: Spoilers for up through volume 7 of Reload
Pairing(s): Hakkai/Gojyo
Notes: "First Time", 57 minutes, 378 words.

Comments

[andmydog]

Sometimes, when he opens his mouth, he manages to not stick his foot in it. XD Thank you!

[andmydog]

I wasn't sure at all about that part... I'm glad it worked! Thank you!

[avierra]

There are a lot of powerful lines in here, including the one about Gojyo's heart stopping also, but actually, my favorite section is this:

I suppose you’re right.

Ha! Another first! Say that again, I wanna bask in th’moment here.

Oh, Gojyo, don’t make me laugh.

It's just so them, the banter, the quiet unspoken acceptance of each other's foibles, but also the quiet unspoken acceptance of each other's good traits too... and it's not only acceptance, it's that they actually enjoy those aspects of each other. I really like how you managed to capture all that in 3 sentences.

[andmydog]

I love the way these two never shut up banter like the old married couple they are. I'm so glad that came across, thank you!

[tochira]

Awesome. That was everything I love about Gojyo.

:D Thanks for this!

[andmydog]

Thank you so much!

[clytemnaestra]

this was absolutely lovely! I love your Gojyo voice, how he's bitter and caring and tough but vulnerable all at the same time. Great job, really!

[andmydog]

He tries to hard not to let on how sweet and caring he is, it's true. Thank you!