Comments | saiyuki_time: Fix It (Challenge #54, 3 Scenes + 3 Words; Gojyo/Hakkai, Sanzo; PG-13)

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Fix It (Challenge #54, 3 Scenes + 3 Words; Gojyo/Hakkai, Sanzo; PG-13)

May 21, 2009 22:26

Title: Fix It
Author: opalmatrix
Warnings: swearing, mild m/m
Pairing(s): Gojyo/Hakkai
Spoilers: tiny bits throughout the first series
Notes: written for saiyuki_time, Challenge #54, 3 scenes, each using a specific word: toxic, bury, kiss.; time allowed: 90 minutes; time taken: about 95 minutes. But I'm late! Sorry!
Summary: When Gojyo falls ( Read more... )

pair:gojyo/hakkai, author:opalmatrix, challenge: 3 scenes, rating:pg-13, char:sanzo

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opalmatrix May 29 2009, 04:05:17 UTC

I'm so glad that Gojyo-Sanzo scene worked for you! I was afraid that it was too short in some ways - that it resolved too rapidly - but of course there was the time limit.

Thanks for reading!

red_squared May 22 2009, 03:29:46 UTC

Oh, I love that conversation between Gojyo and Sanzo. I wish I were articulate enough to tell you why, but just the fact that Gojyo is able to make Sanzo think again... *loves*

Excellent fic! And in 95 minutes, too -- doubly impressive :D

opalmatrix May 29 2009, 04:07:51 UTC

Gojyo's had practice keeping Hakkai grounded, but Sanzo is a very different sort of problem! I'm glad the story worked for you.

Thanks for the kind words. Sometimes the stories roll on out naturally, and sometimes it's like blood from a stone ... this one came pretty quickly once I had the disagreement between the two of them in mind.

suanz May 22 2009, 04:20:26 UTC

I too think the scene between Gojyo & Sanzo was brilliantly executed. Convincing without the need for dramatics. Well done!!!!

opalmatrix May 29 2009, 04:09:23 UTC

Aww, thank you so much!

purpleicicles May 22 2009, 23:48:37 UTC

"I fixed his ass with ph ... phi-loso-phy, Hakkai. It was great. You woulda been so proud."

Haaaaaaaa... not so sure about that, Gojyo, but it worked anyway!! Drunken Gojyo is the height of adorable-ness, especaially when he's saving kiddies ^____^♥

opalmatrix May 29 2009, 04:11:15 UTC

Well, Sanzo told him it was philosophy! So it has to be, right?

XD

Thanks for reading!

lady_ganesh May 23 2009, 02:17:28 UTC

Heh. Nice work.

opalmatrix May 29 2009, 04:12:48 UTC

Aww, thanks!

Were there any bits that particularly worked, or didn't work, for you?

lady_ganesh May 29 2009, 22:02:17 UTC

Honestly, mostly, it was Gojyo, and yes he would take in strays and get drunk and bitch at Sanzo until he gave in, and I just love the way you write him. :D