Comments | saiyuki_time: #53: "Regular Trims" Gojyo/Hakkai, PG-13 (mainly for language)

samsarapine in saiyuki_time

#53: "Regular Trims" Gojyo/Hakkai, PG-13 (mainly for language)

May 08, 2009 19:38

Title: Regular Trims
Author: samsarapine
Warnings: None
Pairing: Gojyo/Hakkai implied/pre-slash
Notes: Written for Challenge #53, 'haircuts'. I didn't make the deadline: 55 minutes writing with an additional 10 minutes for editing.

Concrit welcome.

( Regular Trims )

slash, author:samsarapine, char:gojyo, char:hakkai, rating:pg-13, challenge:haircuts

Comments 22

lauand May 10 2009, 11:51:07 UTC

"Are we talkin' trim, or are we talkin' trim?"

XDD!!! Lovely. I really liked the innuendo. And your characterization of Hakkai. And the premise was great, really.

Thanks for sharing!

ginnyvos May 10 2009, 14:58:42 UTC

LOL total YES to hairwhore-ism! Whihooo!

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ginnyvos May 10 2009, 20:48:31 UTC

Haha, humans, too! <3 (I would SO love to get my hands on Gojyo's hair for example... Or his or Hakkai's in mine...)

helliongoddess May 10 2009, 21:44:41 UTC

I have read very few fics that managed to be so smouldering and yet SO subtle. And even funny at the same time. This really was wonderful. Well-done!! (and I MEANT it about the 5/8/3 thing... )

(And like so many women, the having my hair fondled is a "thing" of mine, so you had me from word one! *grin*)

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helliongoddess May 11 2009, 02:32:44 UTC

Well (like this icon), there is rarely much of anything of subtlety to Gojyo, which is what makes writing him against Hakkai and even Sanzo so much fun- everything with them is nuance ( ... )

purpleicicles May 11 2009, 17:44:12 UTC

*flails in delight* Hair perverts all round!! XD

jedishampoo May 20 2009, 17:21:21 UTC

The image of Sanzo growing piles of hair was crazy-funny enough-- and then you had to throw all that 83 in there and make it sexy. Mrowr.

What? There was 585 in there, too? Bah! ;)

Seriously, though, the idea of Hakkai getting hot at touching hair is pretty cool. And the tie-in to Gojyo's "I'm a perv, so it grows fast" was inspired. Thanks for sharing! :)