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lady_ganesh in saiyuki_time

Then again, maybe not, Challenge 44

Feb 21, 2009 15:00

Title: Then again, maybe not
Author: lady_ganesh
Characters: Nataku and the Gaiden cast
Spoilers: I think vol. 2 of Gaiden
Rating: PG
Time: 30 minutes. I wanted more time, dammit!

( Then again, maybe not )

char:goku, author:lady_ganesh, challenge: road not taken, saiyuki gaiden, char:nataku, rating:pg

Comments 10

cicer February 22 2009, 01:53:20 UTC

Poor Nataku. He really has one of the most tragic fates in Saiyuki, and that's saying something! This was really good.

lady_ganesh February 22 2009, 03:40:51 UTC

It's really a rotten childhood, in a series full of them. Thanks!

lillypuff February 22 2009, 20:16:08 UTC

I echo what cicer said. That poor kid.

You did a lovely job with this!

lady_ganesh February 22 2009, 20:33:26 UTC

Thank you!

nina_vendredi February 22 2009, 21:18:33 UTC

Damn that boy needs a hug. Ok, all of them need hugs, but Nataku's the one that would actually let you hug him without going through your pockets for food, or trying to feel you up.

lady_ganesh February 22 2009, 21:19:19 UTC

Nicely put. Thanks for commenting.

mendax February 23 2009, 15:40:09 UTC

Oh, ouch. Well done. Poor Nataku!

I really love the end.

lady_ganesh February 24 2009, 03:42:06 UTC

Ironically, the end was what I wished I'd had more time with. Thank you!

opalmatrix March 5 2009, 12:11:06 UTC

Poor Nataku! I do hope that somewhere, somewhen, one of the two will turn around and find the other waiting for him. What a joyous meeting that will be.

lady_ganesh March 6 2009, 03:19:38 UTC

It'll be something, that's for sure.