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Setting Camp - PG (36th Challenge)

Feb 21, 2009 00:46

Title: Setting Camp
Author: Lauand

Beta: Avierra

Pairing: Gojyo/Hakkai hints, but I'd think it's rather gen.

Warning: Worksafe

Prompt: Domesticity - 45 min.

A/N: About one hour taken and probably more editing than this comm would expect from its authors. Thank you very much to the awesome Avierra for the beta-reading!

( Setting Camp )

challenge: domesticity, pair:gojyo/hakkai, author:lauand, rating:pg

Comments 8

cicer February 22 2009, 01:57:11 UTC

Nice! I love fics about Sanzo observing Gojyo and Hakkai's relationship.

lauand February 23 2009, 23:05:44 UTC

Thank you!

I don't usually write Sanzo, but for some reason I wanted to watch the scene from afar and Sanzo was the perfect tool.

Glad you like it ^^.

lillypuff February 22 2009, 20:25:45 UTC

Oh Sanzo...do I spot a hint of jealousy?

Lovely job, hun, I really liked this!

lauand February 23 2009, 23:08:56 UTC

I think he's rather rolling his eyes at the others' total unawareness of their married state. I like to think Sanzo has his monkey, even if he's in denial about it.

Thank you! ^^

nekomegami_chan February 23 2009, 08:28:04 UTC

I loved how natural and sweet this was. Well done!

lauand February 23 2009, 23:09:23 UTC

Thank you!!

purpleicicles February 28 2009, 23:31:58 UTC

Not that he didn't consider them a bunch of idiots, but it was sometimes entertaining to watch them interact. Just like a Nature documentary displaying the distinct behavior of some species or another. Haaa, Sanzo you are so hilariously right! ;D

lauand March 8 2009, 17:39:47 UTC

For some reason, I tend to ignore Sanzo in my stories. Don't know why, since his sarcastic point of view and tendency to irritation makes him a great character to play with. Glad you liked him here ^^.