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Footsteps - Gonou - PG-13

Feb 20, 2009 01:24

Title: Footsteps
Author: lillypuff
Characters From: Saiyuki
Pairing(s): none, HakkaiGonou-centric
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 461
Warnings: potentially dark, not-so-happy-thoughts/angst, some mentions of blood
Summary: You know that memories, like wounds, can leave wretched scars…
Disclaimer: They don’t belong to me anymore than they did yesterday, ( Read more... )

char:gonou, author:lillypuff, challenge: road not taken, rating:pg-13

Comments 11

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lillypuff February 22 2009, 20:30:27 UTC

Thanks hun, I'm glad you liked it! =)

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lillypuff February 22 2009, 20:32:49 UTC

Oh yes, I've seen it, I love that picture! Perhaps my subconsious was going back to it lol

Glad you liked the POV. I agree that it's best when used sparingly, if for no other reason than its rather difficult (at least for me) to write. ;)

Thanks for reading!

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lillypuff February 22 2009, 20:35:03 UTC

As if he wasn't angst-ridden enough! ;)

Thanks for reading, I'm glad you liked it!

feait February 21 2009, 14:51:55 UTC

this is amazing. the second person perscpetive gives his discovery by our favorite kappa more meaning. it's like we're hearing his inner voice but that voice doesn't accept that he is Cho Gonou.

lillypuff February 22 2009, 20:36:32 UTC

Yeah, I think it's the demon and the man having a bit of a struggle with each other. Thanks so much for reading, I'm glad you liked it!

feait February 23 2009, 05:21:42 UTC

how could i resist 2 of my favorite things: Cho Hakkai/Cho Gonou & your fics. ^_^

lillypuff March 1 2009, 20:14:58 UTC

Awww, you're too kind, hun =)

cicer February 22 2009, 01:51:15 UTC

I really liked this. It was a very interesting and literal use of the 'road not taken' prompt, and very believable to me. Very nice!

lillypuff February 22 2009, 20:36:56 UTC

Thank you very much, I'm glad you liked it!