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lady_ganesh in saiyuki_time

Another Song About the Rain, Challenge 37

Dec 26, 2008 23:02

Title: Another Song About the Rain
Author: lady_ganesh
Characters: Goku, Sanzo
Spoilers: Nope
Rating: G
Time: Fifteen minutes!

( Another Song About the Rain )

char:goku, author:lady_ganesh, challenge:cold shoulder, char:sanzo, rating:g

Comments 8

macavitykitsune December 28 2008, 04:02:57 UTC

Oh....subtle, sweet and wonderfully IC. Goku cares so much, and he *would* do something like this - and oddly enough, he's the one who steps over Sanzo's boundaries the least, and you brought that out so well. I loved this.

lady_ganesh December 28 2008, 04:09:12 UTC

Thank you so much! I love their relationship.

purpleicicles December 28 2008, 14:57:03 UTC

Mmmmmmm, very much IC for both Goku and Sanzo - you really get the sense of the little things and their significance. Goku's excuse to move around is exactly the sort of thing he'd do, too.

lady_ganesh December 28 2008, 15:02:52 UTC

You can't just ask him to sit! Thanks so much.

threewalls January 4 2009, 11:42:30 UTC

Wonderful.

lady_ganesh January 4 2009, 17:09:39 UTC

Thank you.

despina_moon January 6 2009, 04:09:32 UTC

I'm glad I popped out here - this is wonderful. Leave it to Goku to be so insightful. He's love. Well done!

lady_ganesh January 7 2009, 01:55:05 UTC

I think Goku sees the most clearly of all. Thank you!