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Musings - Challenge #35 - Gonou/Kanan - PG

Nov 28, 2008 15:21

Title: Musings
Author: TheToastAlchmst (Toasty).
Rating: PG.
Warnings: None. Completely work-safe.
Pairing(s): Gonou/Kanan.
Notes: Prompt #35: Head Over Heels - 20 minutes. This probably could have been loads better had I more time, but I'm somewhat pleased with the outcome (even if it lacks several details I would have liked to descriptively ( Read more... )

char:gonou, author:thetoastalchmst, rating:pg, char:kanan

Comments 5

theskywasblue November 28 2008, 23:25:28 UTC

Aww...this makes me feel warm and fuzzy, and kinda sad knowing how it all ended up.

I think it was very good, really, despite the lack of time.

thetoastalchmst November 30 2008, 04:47:29 UTC

Thank you so much! n__n

4bdnsn0wflake November 30 2008, 04:32:56 UTC

Aww...so sweet. :)

I really liked this:

this small, kindhearted being that laughs when he tickles her and cries when she burns dinner.

and this:

Who wouldn't feel awkward when targeted beneath a prolonged stare? Especially his, he knows.

^ A little hint of the dark that resides in Hakkai underneath his gentle, loving self.

thetoastalchmst November 30 2008, 04:49:05 UTC

I'm glad you enjoyed those two phrases. You're right on the second one, too! Dark!Hakkai is definitely lingering beneath those words. *nodnod*

purpleicicles December 2 2008, 00:03:57 UTC

I loved that first line too - it makes me want to hug her for being so gentle and sweet. Also loved the description of her smile as magnificent - there's a real sense of heavenly light going on there!