Hit - Challenge #25 - Gojyo/? - R

Sep 08, 2008 12:15

Title: Hit
Author: TheToastAlchmst (Toasty).
Rating: R for language.
Warnings: Quite the amount of foul language.
Pairing(s): None.
Notes: Prompt #25: Fight - 35 minutes. I won't give away too much, but this scene was burning a hole in my head, thus explaining why I had to write it. ^__^;

Left, right, dodge, duck, swing. Hit! )

challenge: fight, char:gojyo, author:thetoastalchmst, rating:r

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purpleicicles September 17 2008, 11:03:12 UTC
No idea how I missed this, but it's awesome!! You can really feel Gojyo's pissed-off-nesss against the world coming out through this fight, and his righteous anger at Banri, who I really didn't realise was Banri until the end. Great job!! ^___^

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thetoastalchmst September 17 2008, 11:18:35 UTC
One of my main goals with this was, in fact, to keep Banri's indentity on the down-low until the very end. >=3 Moohooha! More mysterious zat vay, yes?

Thank you, though! I'm glad you liked it and such. <3

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