[30² Saint Seiya Themes] (G) can you hear my voice?

[ghaidin]

Title: Teheeeee
Author: ghaidin
Character: Shura
List: B
Theme: 27. Can you hear my voice?
Warnings: Nothing makes sense in the "story".
Disclaimer: Saint Seiya © M. Kurumada, Shueisha & Toei Animation.

Comments

[sagakure]

I feel a little dumb, but I'm not quite sure what's happening in parts of the fic, nor with who, Other than than the fact that it's Shura's POV. ^^;/ Who is he talking to? *hesitates between Shaka and Saga, thinks it's Saga because of the age thing, but wonders who is the girl if she's not Athena*
Is he talking to different people? ^^/ Sorry for not quite getting it. ^^;

Onto a completely different subject, I thought PWP stood for "Porn without plot". ^^;/ No? Although some people might take it for "plot? What plot?", which makes it work with G rating.
Just warning just in case. Because at the beginning, I kept mistaking PWP and POV, sooo.... XD; *lol*

[ghaidin]

Hehehe. Don't feel dumb. The thing doesn't make much sense, mainly because I wrote it "in the going- no idea, no purpose.
I'm afraid it doesn't make much sense because I first meant to have Shura's ghost show up on Shiryu (up to the point where it says "but the time is now"), then switched back to child Shura bugging Saga and things don't make much sense since there.

As is, and with quite a stretch, the story would go like this: Shura's in a cupboard (talking to himself and being quite silly, the poor thing is bored after all). Supposedly, he's in there because he bugged Saga and Saga ratted him out -so when he manages to open the cupboard he goes back to talk to Saga but ends up bugging him again.

All in all, it's a terrible story... but I just felt like writing something badly It's been so long, and I'm soooo tired of working and working and then working some more

About the PWP,sorry! I thought PWP meant "plot? what plot?"
I'll keep it in mind ;)

[sagakure]

But it is a cool fic even if it's written on-the-go etc! :D
I had thought indeed that the first part was in death, and that the person he was talking to wasn't the same than the one in the last part, I just wasn't sure who he was talking to. :D Now it's clear.
*glomps tightly and hopes you'll have vacations or at least less work soon* ;_; It's awesome to go and write fics despite all the work you have right now! *pats & is awed* :D

As for PWP, both versions work, so I created a new tag, and changed the name of the old one so that it all fits fine. ^__^/