Ah here is the post I was looking for! :P Ok, first of all, I really love how you worked with the theme cliff. I had to go back to remember what the theme was because it was suuuper subtle, but definitely one of my favorites. There two little mistakes in "Not a Saint" btw (you said to point them out so I thought you wouldn't mind :s) it's "he had never been" (pretty sure that was a typo) and well, I don't use egoist a lot (tho if you speak portuguese I can see where you're coming from). The most commonly used word is selfish, but it's not really a mistake, just something that caught my attention. Btw, "Not a Saint" was really good too, specially the final part. I love Saga so much *-* Ajdshgkdj "Gravestone" gave me the feels! T_T *sobs uncontrollably* Also, poor Aioros ;_; my archer baby (I ship him with Saga more than anything, but Saga/Kanon comes next XD) Awww, Saga loves him so much in the last one ;_; It's heartbreaking! Btw, really good drabbles, where is this challenge from? I want to do it! :D Kisu ^^
Wow, thenk you very much for all your kind words. Regarding Not a saint, I used the word since it was not a mistake, but I guess I should change it to selfish, it's easer on the eyes. Thank you for your comment regarding my mistake, I hadn't noticed. My first language is spanish, actually (close enough to portuguese)
I don't really like Aiolos, so I guess it was a bit obvious. These drabbles were really special for me, so it makes me really happy to know you liked them this much.
Yeah, like I said, it wasn't a mistake, it sounded just a little weird. Oh, I like Spanish! :D I wrote some stuff in Spanish a while ago for another fandom, but I didn't go to well. XD Aww, poor Aioros (between us I don't dig him that much either but he's still fun). Thanks for linking the community! I'll make sure to choose one! :D
You're welcome. Oh it's not easy to write in spanish, so even if it didn't go well, I think you did something wonderful. Getting reviews when you write in Spanish is somehow harder, so don't get disappointed.
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Ok, first of all, I really love how you worked with the theme cliff. I had to go back to remember what the theme was because it was suuuper subtle, but definitely one of my favorites.
There two little mistakes in "Not a Saint" btw (you said to point them out so I thought you wouldn't mind :s) it's "he had never been" (pretty sure that was a typo) and well, I don't use egoist a lot (tho if you speak portuguese I can see where you're coming from). The most commonly used word is selfish, but it's not really a mistake, just something that caught my attention.
Btw, "Not a Saint" was really good too, specially the final part. I love Saga so much *-*
Ajdshgkdj "Gravestone" gave me the feels! T_T *sobs uncontrollably*
Also, poor Aioros ;_; my archer baby (I ship him with Saga more than anything, but Saga/Kanon comes next XD)
Awww, Saga loves him so much in the last one ;_; It's heartbreaking!
Btw, really good drabbles, where is this challenge from? I want to do it! :D
Kisu ^^
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I don't really like Aiolos, so I guess it was a bit obvious. These drabbles were really special for me, so it makes me really happy to know you liked them this much.
And these challenge is from this community: 30² Saint Seiya Themes for fanworks.
Hope you decide to pick any of the lists.
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Aww, poor Aioros (between us I don't dig him that much either but he's still fun).
Thanks for linking the community! I'll make sure to choose one! :D
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