[30² Saint Seiya Themes] Rating: PG

Jul 07, 2005 21:45

Title:  Just Once.
Author: Ariadne
Character: Aioros
List: B (Night)
Theme: # 11  Only Once
Warnings: It's not proof-read yet. // Yaoi/Shonen Ai Content
Disclaimer: Saint Seiya doesn't belong to me.

Just Once )

¤ fanfic, ¤ Aiolos, [30² StS Themes] (B) Aiolos, b# 11, ¤ Saga, ¤¤ Rating : PG

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undertheice July 8 2005, 03:08:24 UTC
Simply and truly beautiful. *_* This flows so nicely. Almost like a poem it has it's own rhythm, a rhythm I could hear in my head as I read it.
I especially liked the phrase "Dream, God of mine.". It's the perfect example of what kind of mood this fic has.

Really, really nice piece, as always. ^^

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ariadnelabys July 8 2005, 14:50:11 UTC
I don't know what to say...I just felt like writing it like this. What a wonderful thing that you've liked it.

Really, really nice piece, as always. ^^

Thank you. *blush*

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scorpioyue July 8 2005, 03:53:48 UTC
*pops up quickly*

I read so fast and with so many different thoughts in my mind that I didn't notice the Now I’m walking in the Land of the Dead part, at least not until I read My ghostly fingers. That line struck me. But to find out that he's taking care of Saga, watching his sleep... It left me speechless.

I liked it.

*takes a look at the hour and runs away*

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ariadnelabys July 8 2005, 14:51:54 UTC
I'm really pleased you've liked it. ^^

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sagakure July 8 2005, 05:24:45 UTC
*pops in for a moment from the wedding preparations*

*_____* LOVE!!!!!
I love how it flows, and even more the contents! Aiolos is so cool in it, ad what he says is so promising for the next themes! :DDDDDD
And the image of Aiolos ghost wandering in Sanctuary, watching over Saga is so wonderful. (Especially the part where he touches Saga's temple and he shivers, along with the fact that Aiolos says that he'll save him from himself at least once.)
♥____♥

Very very yummy fic! ^_____^

Just a little thingie : In the warning, you might want to put "Shonen Ai", I think you forgot the "ai" part. ^^/

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ariadnelabys July 8 2005, 14:53:42 UTC
Hehehehehehe

I'm so, so happy you've loved it. Wasn't sure about the story...but I guess it ended up being nice ^^

Thanks, Dearest.

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anonymous July 9 2005, 00:02:51 UTC
Both the living and the dead may love. This is yet another wonderful tale. So ethereal and evocative.

The way you present Aioros in this story reminds me so much of the concept of the guardian angel.

Such a beautiful story, and the ghost's touch... that moment sent chills up my spine.

I loved it.

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muinteor July 9 2005, 00:04:04 UTC
Sorry... didn't check the setting... again... and I'd promised myself I would... sorry. I wrote that too.

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ariadnelabys July 9 2005, 03:36:29 UTC
Just check everything before you click on "post comment" ok?

Thanks for your words, Mo cara.

Grà moir.

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ariadnelabys July 18 2005, 01:23:47 UTC
I'm glad you've decided to stop by and read a little. I hope you like future pieces of my work. Thanks a lot.
^_^

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