Title: Just Once. Author: Ariadne Character: Aioros List: B (Night) Theme: # 11 Only Once Warnings: It's not proof-read yet. // Yaoi/Shonen Ai Content Disclaimer: Saint Seiya doesn't belong to me.
Simply and truly beautiful. *_* This flows so nicely. Almost like a poem it has it's own rhythm, a rhythm I could hear in my head as I read it. I especially liked the phrase "Dream, God of mine.". It's the perfect example of what kind of mood this fic has.
I read so fast and with so many different thoughts in my mind that I didn't notice the Now I’m walking in the Land of the Dead part, at least not until I read My ghostly fingers. That line struck me. But to find out that he's taking care of Saga, watching his sleep... It left me speechless.
*pops in for a moment from the wedding preparations*
*_____* LOVE!!!!! I love how it flows, and even more the contents! Aiolos is so cool in it, ad what he says is so promising for the next themes! :DDDDDD And the image of Aiolos ghost wandering in Sanctuary, watching over Saga is so wonderful. (Especially the part where he touches Saga's temple and he shivers, along with the fact that Aiolos says that he'll save him from himself at least once.) ♥____♥
Very very yummy fic! ^_____^
Just a little thingie : In the warning, you might want to put "Shonen Ai", I think you forgot the "ai" part. ^^/
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I especially liked the phrase "Dream, God of mine.". It's the perfect example of what kind of mood this fic has.
Really, really nice piece, as always. ^^
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Really, really nice piece, as always. ^^
Thank you. *blush*
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I read so fast and with so many different thoughts in my mind that I didn't notice the Now I’m walking in the Land of the Dead part, at least not until I read My ghostly fingers. That line struck me. But to find out that he's taking care of Saga, watching his sleep... It left me speechless.
I liked it.
*takes a look at the hour and runs away*
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*_____* LOVE!!!!!
I love how it flows, and even more the contents! Aiolos is so cool in it, ad what he says is so promising for the next themes! :DDDDDD
And the image of Aiolos ghost wandering in Sanctuary, watching over Saga is so wonderful. (Especially the part where he touches Saga's temple and he shivers, along with the fact that Aiolos says that he'll save him from himself at least once.)
♥____♥
Very very yummy fic! ^_____^
Just a little thingie : In the warning, you might want to put "Shonen Ai", I think you forgot the "ai" part. ^^/
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I'm so, so happy you've loved it. Wasn't sure about the story...but I guess it ended up being nice ^^
Thanks, Dearest.
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The way you present Aioros in this story reminds me so much of the concept of the guardian angel.
Such a beautiful story, and the ghost's touch... that moment sent chills up my spine.
I loved it.
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Thanks for your words, Mo cara.
Grà moir.
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^_^
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