[30² StS Themes] Shura - To fight once more - Chapter Four [End]

[undertheice]

This is both the last chapter of this story and my last submission to Shura's 30 Themes. Thanks to everyone who has read and much gratitude to those that have commented. :)

Title: To fight once more - Chapter Four
Author: undertheice
Character: Shura
List: A
Theme: #1 - Justice (Bonus theme, on exchange for #23 - Requiem)
Words: 1220

Chapter One - The

Comments

[ariadnelabys]

*bows*

(...)this was the place he belonged to, where everything seemed to fit(...)

This first one is, heartbreaking. He'd lost so much and had regained it in such a way...God...

But if to fight for justice he would have to be called a traitor by his comrades, then so would it be.

How contradictory, he's called Aioros a traitor (in the canon, I mean) and Saga (here in your story). It must have been hard, yet I think ackowledging one can do anything for his Goddess made him realise that everything "before that night is not of importance".

Wonderful finale.

Now I really need to start working on Aioros' themes ^^U

[undertheice]

Thank you sooo much for your comments. They are always so wonderful and leave me with a smile, feeling all proud of myself. Thank you!!

Yes you do! I'd love to read more Aioros. :)

[ghaidin]

woah. That's all I can say, dear. This was just plain amazing

I especially liked *quotes*

Even this I’d forgotten how it felt
~~~
He had been born to fight for Athena and he would die for her, as many times as she needed him to.

As many times it took, for victory to be theirs.

And the bit about Saga and Shura getting to an understanding without much in words fits them both very well, given the situation.

Thanks a lot for posting this, I think it's my favorite of the 30 themes

*applauds fellow Shura-ist and adds to memories*

[undertheice]

You added it to your memories? Oh, oh, that is... I'm touched, really. I never know how to respond to your comments, as they're always so nice and wonderful and leave me happy beyond words. So, yeah. Heartheart.

Thank you for reading and commenting through all the 30 themes. :) It wouldn't have been nearly as fun without the company of my fellow Shura-ist.

[necchan]

*chin trembles*
This was so sad, but so beautiful too...
*feels a urge to cling to Shura*
*dives for her beloves Saga, instead, sobbing on his chest*
You did truly a wonderful job, this fic was really great!! \0/

[undertheice]

Thank you!! I enjoyed so much writing it, as difficult as it got at times. It makes me very happy to know you liked it that much. :D

[scorpioyue]

♥

Congratulations on finishing! *throws confetti* Oh, I'm really going to miss your posts for the 30 themes, so I hope you keep working on you know what. ;) *awaits*

[undertheice]

*dances under the confetti* I'm going to miss writing all that Shura too. Even if I still have the bonus themes, ahem. But I think the muses are rather happy taking a break from him.

Ohohoho, 'you-know-what' keeps going on, too. As soon as I finish the next batch of themes, I shall send it your way. :}

[scorpioyue]

Icon! Who's that cutie? *_*

Taking a break from a chara after writing 30 themes is good, even though in some cases ideas keep popping up for same chara. O_o And hopefully a bit of Shura will pop up in you-know-what too? Plenty of you-know-what for that, I think. ;)

*awaits next batch as a kid waiting for Christmas day to open the presents*

[undertheice]

Chiriri from Bottle fairy. Basically, cute fairies doing cute things. ;)

Oh yes! I'm sure Shura will come. I'm trying to keep it as diverse as I can. Although the last batch has a lot of bronzies, hnn.

[lady_hook]

what a nice surprise! I've just logged in in lj and found this :3
All I can say is what has already been said by everyone here: amazing!
I love the depth of your characterisation of Shura and his reactions back to life and sanctuary, and how you treat the uneasiness between Saga and Shura.
Congrats on finishing the themes and I'll also miss your posts for the 30 themes.
Any chance you'll be getting another one?? *hopeful* :)

[undertheice]

Thank you for your comment! I'm so happy to know the story was this well received. I'm a proud mother. ;)

Actually, I'm already writing for the 100 prompts. Once I have a nice amount of themes I'll begin posting. I thought I'd stay back from writing StS for a while but... I guess the muses still don't feel burnt out enough. XD