[30² StS Themes] Shura - To fight once more - Chapter Two

[undertheice]

Title: To fight once more - Chapter Two
Author: undertheice
Character: Shura
List: A
Themes: #1 - Goddess, #2 - mask, #3 - Meeting again (Bonus theme, on exchange for #19 - Blindfold), #14 - Thirteen years, #30 - Dagger
Words: 1938

Chapter One - The place that sees him wake up

Comments

[ghaidin]

wah! the angst!
*Takes turns cuddling: hugs Shura, hugs Saga, kicks Camus*

poor Shura. The description of the meal part was very nicely done. I can imagine Shura kicking the plate all the way to the other wall and those guards! *kicks*

And the other two are very much IC, also. Poor Saga, all torn and letting Shura hit him when he could step away from a weak Cappy. And Camus,so rational, so matter-of-factly. And also almost tender *sobs, slaps Camus for good measure*

very nice! :) so, the next chapter is when?

[undertheice]

For a moment I thought I'd read "hugs Camus". Alas, such miracle couldn't happen yet.

I had so much fun describin the meal part. I pity shura. ;)

And EEEEH! about them being IC. OOC is one of those things I fear so very much. But I'm relieved you liked Camus here, considering that there's plenty Camus next chapter. Sorryyyy, such is the story.

[ghaidin]

For a moment I thought I'd read "hugs Camus"
Old trick of paralels aaaaalmost worked ;)

And EEEEH! about them being IC. OOC is one of those things I fear so very much. But I'm relieved you liked Camus here, considering that there's plenty Camus next chapter. Sorryyyy, such is the story.
Very IC, the whole thing. Including story and how they all react to things. *applauds*

Story is very engaging and written like woah! so camus cant spoil it ;)

[ghaidin]

*comes back, stalks, licks fic*

Ahem. Next chapter? *giggles*

in her way out, steps on Camus' toes with her super high, super sharp imaginary heels. Ups sorry

[undertheice]

*cracks up* As much as your stalking warms my heart, today you don't get more. :P And tomorrow I can't, but Thursday for sure! *wags tiny devil tail*

Oh, you're torturing him because he's my sign, right?! You have something against people of my sign, right?!??! There you go, no story until Friday!

[ghaidin]

today you don't get more
*sigh* It was worth the shot.

And tomorrow I can't,
SO? you post tonight instead! Just like i do with the prompts when i know i'll have very busy day! *whimpers*

Oh, you're torturing him because he's my sign, right?!
Ohnonononono, Please dont misunderstand me. I torture him for kicks. Like evilness needed a valid reason, nonotatall.

You have something against people of my sign, right?!??!There you go, no story until Friday!
Hmmm...nops. I must admit I dont know that many *ponders* but you Aqs are nice people. Cold-hearted, fic-depriving nice people, that is ;)

[lady_hook]

indeed you've got something against us aquarians :p

[anonymous]

It weighs on my heart just to think on Shura's moments in that cell and what he went through, then his meeting with Saga...I don't know, it really moved me, especially when Camus is like in the middle of everything and can't really do anything abou it. Then, there's also Saga's pain, Shura's realisation of what really happened to Aioros.

Chapter two it is, how many more are there?

-Ari-

[undertheice]

*blushes* This chapter was really difficult to write, especially that last scene. But once my muses revived, that scene flowed along rather easy. Still, I was always wondering if it was good enough, if it needed something else, etc. So your words make me really proud. Thank you for your comment!

Two more chapters. I should post chapter three Friday Thursday and the last... we'll see when. ;P

[anonymous]

I believe we're always wondering whether something is good or not; and we always think that we could've done it better, jejejeje. I personally think this chapter was really well written, and I can't wait to read the others.

-Ari-

[lady_hook]

just read the two chapters and I like it much ^W^ you make me love Shura more I really enjoy the way you portray him, and poor Saga also, now I want to see if Shura forgives him or not.
I'll join with ghaidin in the stalking mode so you post next chaper sooner if necessary ;) *lol*

[ghaidin]

I'll join with ghaidin in the stalking mode so you post next chaper sooner if necessary ;) *lol*

thank you!!!

[undertheice]

OH NOES. The aquarian has betrayed me and the gemini will not forgive! UNFAIR!

[lady_hook]

haha *evil laughter*
*chokes on evil laughter*
*whispers so that ghai cannot hear* the truth is that ghai is a bad bad influence on me ;)