[30² StS Themes] Shura - The best medicine

[undertheice]

Title: The best medicine
Author: undertheice
Character: Shura
List: A
Theme: #4 The sound of waves - #5 Overflow
Warnings: None
Disclaimer: Saint Seiya © Masami Kurumada, Toei and Shueisha.
Words: 1463

Comments

[ghaidin]

that had used the years of advantage they had to learn everything they needed to step away from their childhood before everyone else.

woah. Really liked this one, the atmosphere and everything was just right. I can imagine Saga's panic, also. And Shura's confussion at having so much fuss around him.

*applauds*

[undertheice]

This was the fic I talked about in that "works in progress" meme. I left it unfinished for several months, then picked it up. Somehow that revived the muses and gave me the kick I needed to finish writing the 30 themes.

As always, thanks for reading and commenting, Shura-comrade. *mega-squish*

[ghaidin]

you've... finished?!

congrats! but you'll keep on writing Shura, wont you? *whimpers*

[undertheice]

That was fast!

And yes, I've finished. I have one more fic to post (I'll post it today, I think) and another long fic (4 chapters) and... that's it. ... Yep, that's it. I still don't believe it actually, maybe I will once I post them all.

Of course I will! Actually I began to write for the 100 prompts and I'm sure Shura will appear around those fics from time to time. And then I'm left without prompts *whimpers* but I'm sure something will always come.

[ariadnem]

Es tan creíble. Es casi como verlos en mi cabeza, el pobre de Saga todo preocupado, Aioros y su asumida febrilidad y el pobre de Shura todo enfermito *.* Me encanta su maestro ^_~

Shura couldn’t look away from Saga’s eyes, that denoted emotions he had never seen before in either him or Aiolos. They portrayed themselves as confident and controlled boys, that had used the years of advantage they had to learn everything they needed to step away from their childhood before everyone else

_O_

[undertheice]

El maestro de Shura siempre anda pululando mi cabeza por aqui y por alla, le gusta aparecer en los fics de Shura. ;P ¡Que alegria que te haya gustado! Este fic fue el primero que termine en meses (lo tuve botado todo ese tiempo, el pobre) asi que tenia miedo que una parte y la otra se sintieran muy distintas o desconectadas, pero parece que salio bien. :)

¡¡Gracias por comentar!!

[ariadnem]

Los maestros son algo que siempre me ha llamado la atención, será por eso que se los ando creando XD. Todo el fic es perfecto, a mi me lo parece. Hay cosas de ese maestro que me gustan y que seguro en el futuro te pediré prestados ^^

Es un honor hacerlo (aunque se me chispotió y me salió en español ^^U)

[undertheice]

Lo que a mi me intriga de los maestros es que, bueno, segun como ellos hayan sido es que los discipulos van a ser. Esa conexion me encanta.

¡Seria un honor que lo usaras! Cuando quieras solo me avisas y yo te puedo dar una nocion de como me lo imagino.

Un poquitin de español no le hace mal a nadie. ;)

[sagakure]

AW! *adores the sweet and cute ending* :D
You portray them all so lovely! ^___^ *clings to cute Saga freaking out about killing the trainee* XD
Shura is just adorable! XD<3

[undertheice]

Aren't they all adorable? Whenever I write them as children, they always come out being so cute. (And a bit scary, when it comes to children like DM :P)

Thank you for commenting!

By the way, some of my posts for the 30 themes don't have the tags of the themes. Whenever you have time (don't worry, no rush) could you add them?

[necchan]

That was lovely! ♥ X>
I simply adore the way you portay Shura! Lovely fic!

[undertheice]

Aah, thank youuu! I really like writing him, so I'm always very glad to know others like the way I portray him. Thank you for your sweet comment!