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[30² StS Themes] Shura - First Impression

Oct 03, 2006 15:05

Title: First Impression
Author: undertheice
Character: Shura
List: A
Theme: #3 - Mirror, #20 - Survivor
Disclaimer: Saint Seiya © Masami Kurumada, Toei and Shueisha
Words: 879

( First Impression )

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Comments 12

ariadnem October 3 2006, 19:33:26 UTC

So wonderful.

I love the way you described Rosu and Saga. And well, Shura is so intriguing in the way you portray him. Can't help like him lots.

undertheice October 4 2006, 16:39:55 UTC

I love to write Aiolos and Saga from Shura's point of view. :D And I'm glad my fics make you like him! He needs the love. XD

necchan October 3 2006, 20:36:17 UTC

I second everything ariadnascrp said! :D
Truly a great fic.

undertheice October 4 2006, 16:41:21 UTC

Waah! Thank you lots for reading and commenting. :D

ghaidin October 4 2006, 03:17:04 UTC

He couldn’t take off his mind the way they mirrored each other, in every aspect that he had been able to observe. And he couldn’t help but wonder if one day he would become someone’s reflection too.

wah! i was lost at first, but things fell into place so very quickly! *applauds*

love the atmosphere, the details... the end!
bravo!

undertheice October 4 2006, 16:47:45 UTC

I'm glad it didn't lose you the entire time, I'd worry otherwise. ;)

Your comments always leave me so very happy. Thanks for reading+commenting! :DD

zhynchan October 4 2006, 04:13:39 UTC

Oh, my God,you're making me like Shura all over again! No, I must focus on my own STS themes....

I like how Shura's thinking about the things around him - I think that is how he'd dealwith the world as a rule. Oh, oh, you must stop me from fangirling him, I will be incoherent the whole day!

undertheice October 4 2006, 16:51:10 UTC

Hohoho, give in! You know Shura needs more love, join our side~ You can always write your themes AND write Shura. More fics for us to read and you get to write him. We all win. :B

Same here, I can imagine Shura always observing everything, attentive and silent. I'm glad I managed to show this aspect. :D

zhynchan October 5 2006, 16:57:18 UTC

Nooo~, you're doing perfectly okay with capturing Shura's mood - I'll, uh, do something else Shura-centric. *crosses fingers so I'll remember that*

I'm admittedly biased when it comes to Shura's portrayal - I'm a Capricorn, so I do the 'observe things from the mountain top' routine often. XD

sagakure October 4 2006, 23:33:05 UTC

*0* *has Shura mood going up*

*catches up with posts so slowly* O_o;

undertheice October 5 2006, 02:14:56 UTC

*shares the Shura love*

Thanks for reading! You know I don't mind the speed. ;P

sagakure October 5 2006, 10:41:45 UTC

*squishes* :D

Yay! XD; *is slow but plans to catch up sooner or later*