Comments | saintedsinner: CRIT POST

saintedsinner

CRIT POST

Oct 17, 2015 21:52

I always enjoy thoughts and ideas on how I can improve Ed, as well as information if I'm slipping on his characterization.

Or if you want to plot! Please let me know, and I'll respond as soon as I can.

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adstring, crit, xi, ooc

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anonymous May 30 2010, 23:30:06 UTC

saintedsinner May 30 2010, 23:35:13 UTC

Hey, thanks for getting a hold of me.

You know, you're right. I was definitely getting ahead of myself there and getting too caught up in his asshole ways. I'm more than happy to retract that last part to take out the OOC part out of it, especially since there's no way for Ed to know about such things.

As for the making a difference in the world, it wasn't meant that Ed knew her background at all. It was meant that she should go and do something instead of whining about it.

Also, feel free to IM me so that I know when those parts are deleted so that it an be finished properly? My IM is graficmemory. Thanks.

saintedsinner May 30 2010, 23:37:07 UTC

"do something instead of whining about it." = meaning stop whining about what she can't and just move on. God, I suck at communication, today.

anonymous November 8 2011, 04:55:29 UTC

Adstring, of course. saintedsinner November 8 2011, 11:59:57 UTC

You're right, his tempered has spiked and it has been recent. Since Rachel's death, he hasn't been in the best frame of mind. I'm not certain how closely the plot was followed, but after her death, the rest of the Glee kids had moved out. Then they came crawling back in, and he wasn't happy with that either. So far, there hasn't been any closure on that. The thought of people here living with him thinking he's basically a ticking time bomb and not having it talked out is eating at him a little.

In addition, with the tombstone event, he 'lived' through Nina dying. Aka, exploding on top of him. There's a bit of PTSD going on there, too. He'll start mellowing out again in the next week or so, basically when this prom event is supposed to happen.

And please don't fret, he's not being an ass to everyone. He's been pretty level during his foot stuck in a trap post, and his grumpiness towards Puck is the same sort of grumpiness he shows towards all the Glee kids when they arrive. More than likely, they're going to live at his ( ... )

anonymous November 8 2011, 17:00:46 UTC

saintedsinner November 9 2011, 03:17:18 UTC

It's no problem! There's so much going on in game that it's hard to keep track of everything. I'm happy I could help!