Comments | saint_seiya: Challenge #7

ariadnem in saint_seiya

Challenge #7

Jun 28, 2005 23:43

I'm going to post this in different places, so forgive me if you see it more than once.

Warning: Not beta-read (yet)

Words: 197

A drabbler on Death Mask

( Life After Death )

ariadnascrp, challenge, 07, deathmask

Comments 5

muinteor June 29 2005, 10:36:22 UTC

Oh, so beautiful, dearest friend ( ... )

muinteor June 29 2005, 10:40:21 UTC

Ehm, the numbers that appear at the end of certain lines have no meaning... they simply mark the line number... how awful... I realised this after posting... please ignore the ugly numbers.

ghaidin July 1 2005, 16:01:05 UTC

The poem is beautiful. I always found those were enjoyed best with a mug of warm cocoa (coffee for those who enjoy it)

Though I must say I have a hard time imagining DM in that poem *grin.* I never cared too much for the guy, I guess

muinteor July 3 2005, 07:33:40 UTC

I didn't use to like him either, but I'm starting to, and Ariadne has given him such humanity in this drabbler that I was moved to respond.

I love the images of Death Mask's ghost, and the wild daisy, of Death and Life, of life growing in such a dark place as the Cancer temple.

In her drabbler, Ariadne shows that life is stronger than death.

I think THAT'S beautiful.

saintallee July 18 2005, 06:03:42 UTC

Wow, that's just beautiful. I really like Death mask, so this made me really happy.