Fic: we won all the battles (6,7)

[ghaidin]

Title: we won all the battles (parts 6 and 7)
Link to the whole thing in ari's labyrinth here
disclaimer: Kurumada, Toei, Shueisha own.

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[undertheice]

They mounted the hill, stopping only to close the eyes of their dead comrades along the way.

Augh. No words describe how this fic currently has me. Just... *sighs for the umpteenth time* And whenever I think things can't get worse, the floor around them is destroyed just like that. What else can happen?! ... Aaaand now they're going in circles. I love these twists. I feel like I'm spiraling into chaos along with them.

I held my breath for most of part 6. The part with Milo and Austrina was unbelievable. The description of their struggle, desperate but in a way beautiful, with Shura stopping their madness and that last line...

So far, part 6 is my favorite, but I get the feeling this will keep getting better.

Mu knelt besides the child, for only now did Shura realize just how young the Swan saint really was, and muttered some comforting words that didn’t reach Shura’s ears.Brilliant line there. I was ready to scold Hyoga for his stupidity so far, but that changed my perception and adds depth to the tragedy around them. And Shun's

[ghaidin]

*switches AC on, still continues melting*

T'is so nice of youuuuuu

I feel like I'm spiraling into chaos along with them.
YAY!

So far, part 6 is my favorite, but I get the feeling this will keep getting better.
*sends chocolate*

Brilliant line there. I was ready to scold Hyoga for his stupidity so far,
Please don't refrain on my account. But it's all Camus' fault, of course :E

I think cliffhangers would have obliged me to threaten you in physical ways. :E
*takes a steps back*
ehmmmm... thanks?

[undertheice]

*takes a steps back* ehmmmm... thanks?

But in a loving way! You know. The "I'm a desperate reader who is ready to scream because I'm dying to know what happens next" way. :B

[ghaidin]

yah, right. I remember once you threatened me with a stick! :R