Comments | saint_elsewhere: Broken (Ianthony)

saint_elsewhere

Broken (Ianthony)

Jan 06, 2012 04:20

“Oh man, I’m so excited,” I squealed, jumping a little in my seat, my buckle holding me down.

“Me too,” Anthony smiled as he turned the wheel of the car, turning onto the ramp for the highway.

“So you still won’t tell me where we’re going?” I smiled, tracing my fingers lightly up his thigh, teasing him as he flinched at my touch, flicking his dark ( Read more... )

pg-13, car accident, blood

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saint_elsewhere January 6 2012, 10:03:08 UTC

Glad you liked it! I tried not to make it too scary. I didn't want to scar people xD

haha nooooooo. Not phenomenal at all.

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saint_elsewhere January 6 2012, 10:10:23 UTC

YOUR writing is phenomenal! I want to make sweet, sweet love to it.

Ok, that's kind of creepy.

I look up to your writing :)

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michaelangelo24 January 6 2012, 10:06:45 UTC

What a graphic car crash. :o I'm interested to see what happens to them afterwards. :)

saint_elsewhere January 6 2012, 10:07:56 UTC

It's something that no one would ever want to be in.

I might write a small sequel... maybe. I'll see if I'm feeling up to it.

mercurial_fan January 6 2012, 10:59:40 UTC

please write a sequel! I love hurt/comfort, and after all this hurt it is time for comfort ;)

saint_elsewhere January 6 2012, 20:32:49 UTC

Ok fine. I'll write a sequel. :P

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rahhicecream January 6 2012, 13:39:42 UTC

Wow, this was great! I was really into it. You illustrated the scene perfectly! I can't wait to see what happens next! :D

saint_elsewhere January 6 2012, 20:36:02 UTC

Yay! I'm glad the vividness got out :P

raeofthestage January 6 2012, 14:33:57 UTC

Ian? Anthony? OMG THIS WAS SOO GOOD!!!! scary and sad but really really really good!!!! :) I am glad that no one died:) I am going to add my self to the list of people who want a sequel. Pretty please?

saint_elsewhere January 6 2012, 20:36:36 UTC

I didn't want anyone to die. I'm not a big fan of death fics, even though in my last fic, Ian died xD

I'll write a sequel :P

raeofthestage January 6 2012, 21:20:18 UTC

YAYAYAYAYAYAyAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY!!!!!!!! im exceited for that sequel if you couldnt tell ;)

yay no one died mcmm1 January 7 2012, 09:15:38 UTC

omg please wrote the sequel really fast i love this but it so sad :(

destiel09 January 6 2012, 20:27:07 UTC

I knoe that they won't die, but I'm still scared!! Aww, Ian is so cute when he's looking for Anthony. Poor them, Sequel?? Pleeeaaseee??

saint_elsewhere January 6 2012, 20:38:42 UTC

Hahaha. I will write a sequel :)