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Fic: The Bad Beginning

Oct 25, 2006 21:42

I thought about writing out the entire "first episode", but decided against it. Instead, this is a thematic little piece of events that would be in the first episode/chapter/act/unit of at least one incarnation of PASJ: the first meeting between Jon and Stephen ( Read more... )

-fic-, -backstory-, author: sailorptah, character: stephen junior, character: jon stewart, character: stephen colbert

Comments 10

myrabidpetspoon October 26 2006, 02:27:18 UTC

Now I REALLY wish I watched Sailor Moon when it was on air... Cuz now I have to got out and BUY the series to understand how truly great this piece is! :D

Even without the Sailor Moon knowledge, I <3 this! It's SO cute! And I LOVE the way Jon says Stephen's handsome. It's TOO PERFECT!!! And utterly seductive

YOU ROCK MY WORLD!!

sailorptah October 26 2006, 02:33:38 UTC

Oh, man, scrolling script! What have I done to deserve this?

If you can get ahold of the start of anime or the manga, it's the same event either way. Find one or the other and you will understand just how much of this is ripped off =P

Thank you!

rhapsodomancing October 26 2006, 06:16:14 UTC

Also, YOUTUBE. It saved my life!

nest October 26 2006, 16:48:15 UTC

Hahahah, I thought this was really cute. :3 I always kind of wondered how one would go about making Jon and Stephen kind of antagonistic towards each other in the beginning, kind of like how Usagi and Mamoru were, and I think you pulled it off pretty well. And I liked the contrast between the whole "he's a jerk" and "he's handsome" thing. I really think I enjoyed this a lot more than I should have, but it's your fault for getting me addicted to such deadly crack. ANYWAY, hope to see more from you.

sailorptah October 26 2006, 20:49:34 UTC

I pretty much purloined the general idea of how to get them to dislike each other from this fic ^_^

Given that this mess crackalicous premise is largely my fault, you will definitely be seeing more from me =D Glad you liked this one!

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sailorptah October 26 2006, 20:54:22 UTC

Most excellent.

I love the way Jon says that =3

silver11016 October 26 2006, 21:22:58 UTC

I think the bit about the talking eagle was what really got me here.

So much better than the cat. That one deserves a cookie.

sailorptah October 26 2006, 21:54:45 UTC

Ah, don't be hatin' on the talking cats!

Although Junior certainly deserves cookies =D

madame_furious October 26 2006, 22:43:12 UTC

Yes! Jon's reaction at the end is priceless!