[doctor who fic] i'll show you the way (the way i'm going), pg

[hihoplastic]

i'll show you the way (the way i'm going)
- doctor who
- river/doctor, martha jones, jack harkness
- pg
- 8600
- written for dr_helenmagnus for the spoiler_song ficathon. darling, i am so, so sorry this is so late! you're a saint for putting up with me. ♥
- this is why i don't write plot, dear lord. i am so sorry. / title from 30 seconds to mars' capricorn.
- prompt: i

Comments

[lifes_own_light]

I love everything about this. It's just ... fantastic, brilliant, and cool. Brava!

[hihoplastic]

Thank you so much! :D

[dr_helenmagnus]

asdfgfgfhhghkl! *flail*
Do you know how unbelievably perfect this is? Because this touched on all the perfect things I could have possibly wanted from a story like this. It's lovely and I can't even express my love for this enough. Absolutely worth the wait for it!
The interaction between each set of characters was perfect. The flirting was perfect, and you included Jack and River flirting and kissing and OMG I think I might actually be dead now. I think I might be a data ghost typing this!
The little bits of sad are perfect here. Jacks observations about him knowing, I wanted to cry.
And of course you have perfectly included every little bit of River that makes me adore her. It's amazing, thank you a million million times.

[hihoplastic]

Oh, thank goodness! I'm so, so thrilled you liked it!! I'm so, so sorry it took me so long to get it to you! I am RUBBISH at ficathons and deadlines. Thank you so much for being so patient and nice about it. *hugs madly*

I'm still working on your other prompts, but they'll probably be quite a while in the making, lol. But I wanted to let you know I DO intend to do them, or at least something like them.

Thank you again for all your patience and your beautiful, beautiful comment! ♥

[dr_helenmagnus]

Now I'm flailing again! Because OMG take forever please because your work is brilliant.
I keep trying to write more too but I keep getting sucked back in to Mattex and real life things. I totally understand being busy because I've got two kids and it's summer now.

[hihoplastic]

Haha, thank you do much! You are so sweet. <3 the same thing's been happening to me! Mattex is far too addicting to be legal! Lol. I've been working on a saga that is taking up much of my fic writing time lol.

Ahh, yup. There goes all your free time, lol. I totally understand!

[vickysg1]

This is amazing!! I love this fic! It's so perfect! I love having Jack and Martha interact with River! And I knew that River was going to be hurt, but phew, she's fine. Like I already said, this fic is amazing, darling!

[hihoplastic]

Aww thank you so much sweetie! I'm so glad you liked it! *hugs*

[just_liv]

There's not a single word out of place in this. Every is as it should be. For real. A wonderful wonderful piece! Thanks for sharing.

[hihoplastic]

Thank YOU so much for reading and commenting! I'm so thrilled you enjoyed it! :D

[cardiogod]

I LOVE THIS.

Your dialogue is beyond perfect, especially the banter between Jack and River. I can't imagine the Moff himself writing it any better.

[hihoplastic]

Whaaaaaa ohmygod. Best compliment EVER. *spazzes* out* alwkejrwlkajrwlekr thank you so much!! I'm so glad you liked it!