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hihoplastic January 2 2012, 08:57:11 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! :D

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jadethe2nd December 26 2011, 17:47:08 UTC
Love! All the dialogue, and all the Doctor's thoughts, and for some reason I really like it when River jumps off of things, so this was perfect :D

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hihoplastic January 2 2012, 08:57:37 UTC
Hee, I love when she does that, too. I'm so glad you liked it! :D

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vickysg1 December 26 2011, 17:59:35 UTC
Oh, this is awesome! And they're cuffed? God, I hope Rory and Amy see them like this, it'd be funny!

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hihoplastic January 2 2012, 08:58:35 UTC
LOL, I think poor Rory's been scarred enough, lmao. Amy would probably just grin. But it would be great. Before the Ponds exit, I really hope there are more Team TARDIS bonding timeds.

Thank you for reading, love!

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dozmuffinxc December 26 2011, 22:53:11 UTC
*DANCES* Your River absolutely cracks me up! And oooh, when I "saw" that cliff coming, I just knew what was to come. But then having River pause to ask the Doctor whether he trusts her and pulling the "spoilers" line made me smile like nothing else. A lovely story - I just wish there was more!

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hihoplastic January 2 2012, 08:59:29 UTC
Hee, yay! Thank you so much! I love writing her so much. *squishes River* Hee, River can never resist an opportunity to jump from a great height, lol.

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amilyn December 27 2011, 04:43:47 UTC
Oh my goodness! SO FUNNY! Swords. Beheading swords. Geronimo...that's my line! Gallifreyan swearing. "I take my cues from you." Asking the TARDIS to pick them up. "Not good and very not good." You've just got their voices SPOT-ON DOWN PAT. I love this. I grinned all the way through. ::joy::

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hihoplastic January 2 2012, 09:00:01 UTC
Hee, thank you so much! I'm so happy you enjoyed it! :D I'm so glad you thought their voices were in character! *flails*

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