Comments | sail_your_sea: [doctor who fic] (it's the season of grace) coming out of the void (2/3), r

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[doctor who fic] (it's the season of grace) coming out of the void (2/3), r

Aug 17, 2011 18:47

(it’s the season of grace) coming out of the void (2/3)
- doctor who
- river song; river/doctor (eleven)
- 5800 this section
- r
- a/n: spoilers up through a good man goes to war, but not for the second half of series six. warning for mentions of child abuse, but nothing graphic.
- endless thanks to tenacious_err for the beta/suggestions, and to bigdamnxenafan and leanstein for the ( Read more... )

character: dw - eleven, character: dw - doctor (all), genre: all's well that ends well, character: dw - river song, genre: angst, genre: romance, length: multi-chapter, pairing: dw - river/doctor, fic: doctor who

Comments 21

ladymercury_10 August 18 2011, 02:58:39 UTC

Oh, yay, part 2! I can't wait to see how this ends--I've really enjoyed reading.

This was really interesting--the details of her past are so believable, and the ways they impact her relationship with the Doctor are very poignant. I especially like this line, and the whole paragraph it's in, really:

Your entire life was wrong and you made it about doing something right. Every day."

I do have a question, though: who was the man she gave the injection to? Was it the Doctor? And was she euthanizing him?

hihoplastic August 18 2011, 20:40:38 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm so, so happy you're enjoying it. I'm glad you find it believable! I'm sort of extrapolating from little hints here and there, so. I'm glad it doesn't seem too far-fetched! :)

The man was Renfrew, from the children's home in Day of the Moon (I'm not sure they actually ever said his name in the episode; I can't remember). Sorry that was so confusing! I can explain more if you want/need, and there's a bit more about it in the next chapter. :)

ladymercury_10 August 18 2011, 21:58:31 UTC

Oh, the guy from the creepy children's home! Okay.

owlsie August 18 2011, 04:33:49 UTC

This is outstanding, I love it. <3

hihoplastic August 18 2011, 20:40:57 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm glad you're enjoying it! :D

ssw_loved August 18 2011, 05:26:22 UTC

ohmygod this is just fantastic, love. absolutely fantastic.

hihoplastic August 18 2011, 20:41:20 UTC

Thank you! :D I'm so glad you're enjoying it!

just_liv August 18 2011, 16:16:33 UTC

Can't find the words to describe how this story makes me feel.
I don't know with I love the poetry within each line or the story itself.
I can barely wait for the outcome.

hihoplastic August 18 2011, 20:42:33 UTC

Oh, thank you so, so much! I'm so happy you're liking the story (and the style)! The last part should be up early next week. :)

coffee_mill August 18 2011, 19:15:16 UTC

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This story is simply glorious. I can't find more accurate words to describe it.

hihoplastic August 18 2011, 20:43:23 UTC

YAAAAY KEYMASH! \o/

Thank you so much! I'm so so happy you're liking it so far! :D