Comments | sail_your_sea: [stargate: atlantis fic] six days at the bottom of the ocean, pg13

hihoplastic in sail_your_sea

[stargate: atlantis fic] six days at the bottom of the ocean, pg13

Nov 28, 2009 03:54

six days at the bottom of the ocean
- stargate: atlantis
- john/elizabeth
- 7500
- pg13
- for face_myself, who requested this ages ago. i hope you like it! ♥
- infinite thanks to antiqueskies for making me fix it and anuna_81 for the hand-holding
- title from the song by explosions in the sky
- au post-first strike (sans replicators); sunday never happened
- a hero is no braver ( Read more... )

challenge: request, genre: alternate universe, pairing: sga - johnelizabeth, genre: all's well that ends well, fic: stargate atlantis, genre: angst, genre: romance, length: one-shot

Comments 41

anuna_81 November 28 2009, 02:12:00 UTC

You know already what I think - this is gorgeous, completely and flawlessly gorgeous. It breaks my heart and fixes it right back. I love how you write them, strong and vulnerable and perfectly fitting for each other. She stepped in front of him because she loves him, but saying that out loud is somehow more frightening than facing the death.

I heart this pairing to pieces and nobody does it justice like you do. And great title, btw. *hearts you and your fics*

Now I'm happily off to bed :)

hihoplastic November 29 2009, 10:54:56 UTC

*hugs you madly* Thank you so much, lovely. I'm so so so happy you liked it. And thank you so much for all the hand holding! Hee. This would probably be in my trash bin if not for you! ♥

anuna_81 November 29 2009, 11:44:31 UTC

This? In a trash bin? You're either underestimating your story or giving me far too much credit. All I did was flail, which was rightfully deserved.

And nothing to thank for - I'd hold your hand anytime and would read anything you write. Even in Arabic.

icarus_abides November 28 2009, 02:54:59 UTC

This, like all of your work, is SO beautifully written. Damn, I miss this pairing so much...

hihoplastic November 29 2009, 10:53:37 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

I know, man. Why on earth canon didn't go this direction is completely beyond me....

hariboo November 28 2009, 03:36:24 UTC

So wonderful. That last line is love.

hihoplastic November 29 2009, 10:52:56 UTC

Thank you! ♥

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hihoplastic November 29 2009, 10:52:32 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed it. :D

yaboiksar November 28 2009, 04:38:13 UTC

I love your style. The way you just throw some words into sentences, it's so jarring but it wakes you up, if that makes any sense. It makes you pause and really absorb what you're reading. Everything flows so nicely and it's so visual. Always wonderful to read. Great job!

hihoplastic November 29 2009, 10:52:10 UTC

Wow, thank you! I'm really glad you enjoyed it!