Comments | saigo_no_lady: Just Me and You (Part Two 2/2)

boblemon in saigo_no_lady

Just Me and You (Part Two 2/2)

Aug 14, 2013 16:51

Title: Just Me and You
Rating: PG13
Pairing: Jun/Sho, Aiba/Ohno, Touma/Nino
Genre: Romance, angst(?), AU
Disclaimer: I guess Johnny’s technically owns Arashi, huh? Not me.
Summary: At Ohno and Aiba's wedding, Jun and Sho face confrontation. Although they had only ever had one serious argument over their some-odd three years of dating, it had been ( Read more... )

angst?, pairing: aiba/ohno, pairing: jun/sho, series: paint film and stuffed animals, pairing: nino/touma

Comments 13

amnos13 August 14 2013, 14:14:30 UTC

ah... i really love it :D thank you

boblemon August 15 2013, 02:48:32 UTC

Thank you for reading! :D

misnangy August 14 2013, 18:49:37 UTC

Sakumoto <3
I love your fic. Thanks for sharing with us, we really need more sakumoto's fic!
I like the fact that you kept their personality. Like the awkward shyness of jun and the serious of sho.

I'm French so if I can help you with the sentences it's with pleasure. I would put it more like that:
Bon soir = Bonsoir
Maison bienvenue! = Bienvenue à la maison! ( but I think it's on purpose he's wrong there because it's cute that jun is wrong no?)
Le temps est beau. = Il fait beau
D'accord, = C'est vrai
Vous êtes beau = Tu es beau ("Vous" is the polite form)
Le bel est vous = C'est toi qui es beau.
Je veux avoir des rapports sexuels avec vous = Je veux faire l'amour avec toi.

boblemon August 15 2013, 02:51:04 UTC

Their personalities were a little different from the original story I think, but I had a good time with it! Always nice to try new things. :D

Oh my God, thank you so much for helping me with the French. T_T I didn't know what to do, even after checking online for an hour I wasn't sure what I was writing was correct. I'll probably leave Jun's greeting the same, because at least if his french is bad there is a reason for it, haha. ^__^ Thank you again, I'll go ahead and edit it right now. :D

shinigamiami August 15 2013, 04:54:07 UTC

Hey! Where's the make up sex scene? XD Just kidding.... (ish)

It was a good ending... Painful for the most part, but it's to be expected when you're dealing with Sho and Jun ;-; So much angst....

What's your AO3 username btw? I'll subscribe you :)

boblemon August 15 2013, 05:22:47 UTC

Thank you for reading! Sorry no sexy taims. >_< Something about writing more of that scene just didn't feel right, so forgive me!

Yes, Sho and Jun somehow create angst, don't they? Even though they were so happy in the first story!

My username is boblemon (same as here). Hope you don't mind a little spam. XD If I ever get the motivation to go through my old stories and edit them a little before reposting.

shinigamiami August 15 2013, 05:29:48 UTC

Thanks for writing! It's okay, It would've interrupted the flow anyway...

It's like the norm for them is angst...

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dekkawai August 16 2013, 03:06:39 UTC

I really love the way you describe Jun and Sho relationship...
Thank you :)

boblemon August 16 2013, 13:05:15 UTC

Thank you for reading! :D

helenmaldon August 16 2013, 14:09:38 UTC

KYAAAAAAAAAA! Especially for the French part ^^ I was grateful for my high school French xD
This was WONDERFUL and LOVELY and THANK YOU for sharing!!! I also loved the part where Koharu re-enacted the wedding ceremony, that was a really sweet way to hear Aiba and Ohno's vows : )
You make me love couples--Ohba, Sakumoto--that I almost never read. This is the best <3

boblemon August 16 2013, 15:00:43 UTC

Haha, good think I got the french looked over then because I couldn't have been right with what I had before, lol.
Thank you for all of your comments! :D I read them all and may go back and reply to them when I have a bit more time, but just, thank you, haha. Glad everything turned out well, can't go wrong with Koharu, right? XD