Ohno in Wonderland

[boblemon]

Title: Ohno in Wonderland
Rating: PG-13ish
Pairing: Ohno/Everyone (specifically Ohno/Jun), Nino/Sho
Genre: AU, fantasy bordering on crack
Chapter: three
Disclaimer: I guess Johnny’s technically owns Arashi, huh? Not me.
Summary: Just like Alice, Ohno falls down the rabbit hole... only there are more familiar people there waiting for him than

Comments

[vleong]

IM EGGCITED FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER KEKEKE ITS BEGINNING TO GET INTERESTING HAHAHAH...I HOPE OHNO CONFESSES TO JUN AND JUN WILL EXCEPT AND BREAK UP WITH HIS GF HEHHEHHE...JUNTOSHI FTW!!!!<3...LOVE SAKUMIYA~~~

[boblemon]

Hee hee, thanks! You'll have to see how it ends yourself, but I like happy endings, if that gives you a hint. ^.^

[grutendon]

Ah!
I can't wait for the next chapter!! The sakumiya moments are too cute!! AH!!
(I didn't commented on the first two chapters but it was cool from the begining!)

[boblemon]

Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it!! ^.^ Sakumiya is just too fun to write.

[bokunosubete]

The Swordfish and the Shark.Did you come up with it on your own or was it a real uh folktale or something?Because it's a really sad story. ;_;

And as off this chapter,i really like it.Like you said,there's a lot more content in it.There are questions started popping into my brain as i read.Is Nino as bad as the Red Heart Queen in the real Alice in Wonderland or is he a kind one?And somehow i can't help but to feel there's something more than just being a dream.I mean,the one where Ohno dream of being a swordfish.Or maybe that's just my imagination overworking. xD

[boblemon]

I came up with it myself for this specifically. ^.^ In the book and the animated movie there are little interludes of stories that seem unrelated (although I don't think they really are?), so I thought I would try my hand at something similar. It turned out pretty sad, didn't it? Even though it's so simple...

Hmm, I'm not really sure how to answer your second part. You'll have to read Nino's character a little bit more before you'll really be able to say whether he's good or not, and as for the dream... well, the same. It'll become a little more clear as the story comes to an end. If you still have questions then, I'll be glad to answer them .^.^

Thanks so much for reading and commenting!!

[xyabux]

:o : DD I kind of like Nino's in this. :'D But still.. :'D Would like to see Jun more >DD (Juntoshi forever<3) but this is good. :) I really can't wait to next chapter and see how things going 8)

[boblemon]

Yeah, Jun wasn't in this chapter much, was he? Don't worry, he'll be in pretty in the storyline pretty consistently after this. ^.^ Juntoshi will make a come-back!!

Thanks for your comment! I hope you like the rest of it as well. ^.^

[xyabux]

Yeah he wasn't only little. :D Yattaa~ !! Now I have more reasons to wait new chapters :DD

Yes I will n.n And You welcome :)

[lichama]

Very Good. Love every details u describe about the set, wears n everything. u make it easy to imagine and picture it. It's very wonderland-ish when Ohmiya take a bath.... I can feel Ohno sadness and mellowness .It's a wonderfull chapter. And I love chesire Aiba . Purring and nuzzling~~~
Thank You

[boblemon]

Aw, thanks. Sometimes I feel like I write too many details and it gets long, so I'm glad you think otherwise. ^.^

Wonderland-ish when Ohmiya takes a bath... that's a surprisingly nice compliment! I really like this scene because it shows Nino's character and his relationship with Sho a little more. And yes... even though Ohno is having fun, he misses his other friends. :(

Thank you so much for your nice comment!!