Setback

[boblemon]

Title: Setback
Rating: PG13-ish
Pairing: OT5, Nino/Arashi
Disclaimer: I guess Johnny’s technically owns Arashi, huh? Not me.
Summary: Nino doesn't want to bring Arashi down, but Arashi doesn't want to lose him either.
Notes: This is a fic trade with alexxasick who asked for Nino-centric OT5-ness. :D Actually this was also an excuse for me to write Arashi

Comments

[doctoggy]

I love this. I will flail more when I am home from work. But yay!!!!!

[boblemon]

:DD Yay! I finally wrote some OT5 :DD

[doctoggy]

yay for OT5!!!

so one, the fact that you said anything that you write is a slightly me ish style is flaberghasting. totally shocking. and it makes me very very happy. :)

two, is the fact that i loved how you write nino. he is my will not overtake jun but currently my very close second to the top favorite at the moment. .

three, i love how its OHNO of all people who delays Nino, and makes sure that he will be home late enough to let the others get there, and that because it is Ohno, NIno doesnt think twice about it

and i love how each of them approached Nino, and tired to make him feel better, and yes. I just love this.

And while it is like mine in the one of the members is sick and they all take care of him until he is better manner, I think that it is nothing like mine, since you do it so much better, and it tugged on the heartstrings, and I was so disappointed when Nino was, and so glad when it didnt end up like that, and this is love.

[boblemon]

You inspired me to want to write OT5 dating each other, so I have to give you credit~ Although this was focused on Nino, the image I was going for was general Arashi love that just happened to be through Nino's POV. I actually love writing him because he's got a lot of roles he can fit into, whether he's a brat or the devoted one (and I always write Ohno, so it's good to get something new out too, lol). I usually don't write Ohmiya because it's common (and honestly, not that interesting for me =A=; ) but they ended up being pretty cute in this one, like best friends with benefits. Like Ohno knows everything and it's just whether he decides to act on it or not. >_< So I was actually thinking of just ending it with them going home together and Ohno acting as the comforter, but that was a bit depressing and not quite sneaky enough, so it ended up as it is. :)

Thank you so much for reading and I'm so happy about your comment! <3<3

[deelovesryo]

Nino had even been expecting… no, hoping, desperately hoping, that this would happen, that they had just wanted to surprise him <- I was hoping this too, I was so happy when I read about the kitchen light and so on but II wonder if Nino would punish them for the disappointment he felt at the green room, lol
I liked it a lot, you portrayed Arashi's deep bond and friendship really well and how they take care of Nino, each of them in his own way according to their different characters. You always preserve Arashi's personalities no matter what the fic is about or if it's AU or not, I like that a lot in your writing.
Thanks for sharing!

[boblemon]

Maybe he'll punish them, haha. ^__^ That's definitely like Nino.

This seems similar to a few things I've written, like personal perspective on how the members treat each other, but I haven't done Nino yet so I thought it would be okay. :) You always give me nice compliments, so thank you very much! <3

[alexxasick]

It's so cute~ and nice and fluffy and everything...

I'm so embarrased because I haven't been able to write more than a few paragraphs -_-

[boblemon]

I hope it's what you were looking for... Somehow I feel like it got out of hand... =A=; But for some reason I feel very much like writing OT5 right now.

Haha, don't worry about it. ^__^ It was a miracle that I got this done, I just managed to write it all during a day that I had off and sort of felt like writing. Please take your time. :)

[kokkaii]

I saw Nino/Arashi and I thought "she finally got around to writing it!" I was sort of surprised to find PG-13 instead of higher rating though.

But this was infinitely sweeter than I expected though! I love it when Nino is pampered because he was almost always written as the guy with the head on his shoulders right (unless he's being melodramatic but... yeah), and him being mollycoddled by everyone is adorable. And Arashi taking care of him individually and in their own ways! < 3This OT5 needs moar! MOAR I SAY XD

Thanks for sharing!

[boblemon]

If I wrote a higher rating for this it probably would have been seven times as long. >_< But unfortunately I don't have the energy for that right now. Although I still really want to write that~

Although Nino is definitely the "guy with the head on his shoulders right" whenever I hear about him not eating, and knowing what it's like to be a gamer, I wonder if the other members baby him like this. Not that he asks for it, but he seems pretty dependable until you actually find out about his lifestyle, lol, and then they get overly worried. And I like that because instead of getting annoyed (too much) he just accepts it because it's easy and free. XD

I sort of feel like this universe needs more too. I bugged doctoggy so much about writing something sexy in her universe that I feel like I need to do the same. But I need motivation or something! I feel like I used up all my sex writing energy around a year ago. =__=

[kokkaii]

Don`t say that! I`m a huge fan of your... sexy stories? XD

This fandom, in general, needs more OT5. They have too good a chemistry! All five of them, I mean. Although, I can understand the difficulty in writing them and keeping them a group of five rather than a group of five with specific pairs.

And I'm waiting for that other Nino/Arashi fic! XD

[helenmaldon]

Sequel pleez?? But even on it's own, this is very complete and simply adorable...lovely and made me feel relaxed while reading it!! All the warm fuzzy member love made me feel like I was getting a back massage lol *^^* All of it was good, I especially enjoyed Nino / Jun interaction : )

[boblemon]

If I get motivation to write a sequel, I feel like it needs one too. But it could be a while. >_<

I'm glad you were fuzzy~ And I think I liked Nino/Jun the best in this too, although I hardly ever write them. Their relationship is just so... unique, lol. ^__^