Extracurricular Activities

Oct 22, 2011 18:16

Title:Extracurricular Activities- Part 2
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Jun/Ohno/Aiba, Sho/Nino, (mention of Everyone/Sho)
Disclaimer: I guess Johnny’s technically owns Arashi, huh? Not me.
Summary: In which Art Club goes on a school trip and studies. Very hard. Sequel to After School.

Part 1

'P-please,' he said weakly, his eyes already half closed, his hands still on Nino’s hips but with absolutely no strength left in them. )

pairing: aiba/ohno, pairing: jun/sho, nc-17, threesome, pairing: sho/arashi, pairing: jun/ohno, ot5, pairing: sho/aiba, pairing: sho/ohno, oneshot, pairing: jun/aiba, pairing: sho/nino

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kanu_x October 23 2011, 02:57:14 UTC
I'm a little touched after reading this. Even though it's nc17 and hot, but all the emotions were overwhelming too. I don't know how you manage to do it with smut too. I might return with a better comment after I've digested some of this.

Have fun in those 2 weeks!

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boblemon October 23 2011, 10:43:11 UTC
Wow, really? I'm surprised because I thought this was definitely more sex than anything, except for maybe the end (and Sho being more pervy than I usually write him, haha). If you have anything to add later, I'd love to hear it! <3

Thanks so much! I hope I have fun, but I'm more worried about everything running smoothly. ^__^;;

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kanu_x October 23 2011, 15:03:03 UTC
Even though there's a lot of sex, but it's also what goes on between. For instance, Nino being possessive of Sho. Sho having a crush on Ohno, yet somehow, somehow when he thinks that he doesn't want anyone else inside of Nino, he's probably developing something he doesn't know. Likewise, for the original three Junba is possessive of Ohno. Combine all these feelings together and at the end, I was feeling touched. :p To tell the truth, I've never been much of an OT5 orgy person unless there's also some favoritism and possession going on, because that side of human nature I can understand ( ... )

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boblemon October 24 2011, 10:17:30 UTC
Aw, thanks so much for your follow up comment! I love hearing about your perspective ( ... )

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alexxasick October 23 2011, 04:22:31 UTC
First: good luck with your trip, hope your students to behave

AHHhh~ it was so hot the wait was worth it! Poor Sho-chan at the mercy of the horny art club xD (though he loves it), I love cute jealous nino, though I'd like Aiba to fuck Sho at least a little xD Jun Ohno Aiba is too hot xD

I'd like in in an exchange :D though I'm stuck with what I'm writing.. -_-

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boblemon October 23 2011, 11:10:04 UTC
Thanks. They're pretty good kids, so I'm more worried about them being exposed to the big city. =A=

Dude, art club would have done a lot worse to Sho if I hadn't decided to stick solely with the original pairings (I really wanted Jun to take advantage of him, and definitely Aiba, so sorry he didn't get a turn >_< ). I keep thinking this is just a rehash of the What Happens series, though.... >__>;

Thanks for reading and waiting patiently! If you feel like doing a trade, even something short, let me know! <3

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alexxasick October 23 2011, 15:53:45 UTC
I'd love to trade something with you~
maybe if I focus my attention into something else I might be able to be unstuck on what I'm working on :)

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boblemon October 24 2011, 10:18:33 UTC
Yay~ So, a prompt for a prompt? Is that okay? Is there anything you feel like writing? (I'm not sure if I can produce anything too smutty right now, unfortunately)

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helenmaldon October 23 2011, 06:29:22 UTC
Very artistic result of a "hormonal rage," I loved this, thanks for sharing! This really made me go "awww" at the end---oh Sho-kun, "Sho nodded, realizing that he was ahead of himself, but that was just the way he was, always planning, always troubleshooting and thinking about what could go wrong." The characterizations were so good, as always <3

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boblemon October 23 2011, 11:22:27 UTC
Sometimes it feels like I only get anything done if I'm hormonal, lol. ^__^

Yeah, the last part made this something slightly more than smut. I just wanted to add a little Arashi love in there in the middle of art club, and that's how it ended up, although Sho asking Ohno to move in with him is pretty sneaky all around... :)

Thanks for reading and your awesome comments!

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malena_tomoe October 23 2011, 18:22:04 UTC
*dies* Thank you for share! This is a nice story I really like it!

Matsumiya is *o* <3<3 and I love bratty Nino.
Poor Sho-chan always is the victim, but is the most hot 8D

Good luck in your trip :D

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boblemon October 24 2011, 01:32:00 UTC
Thank you for reading!! :DD I love bratty Nino too, and somehow I always end up with someone as the victim (usually Ohno, but Sho's becoming more frequent, ^__^) I'll do my best on the trip~

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lakukuli October 24 2011, 05:16:37 UTC
Good luck in the exchange program :)
Sexy as the first one. Love how even being all five, there are limits because there are feelings involved.
Have to love possessive Nino and protective Jun. BTW Nino's cnfession was unexpected, even if you know he really likes Sho I never imagined he would say it at loud. Cute.
If you continue this series, I can totally see Sho and Ohno together (Sho is just to much into him), of course Nino wouldn't be happy about it and go to tell Jun and probably let him fuck him
Because Jun and Nino with their strong characters would be so much fun and SO HOT
Thank you for writing :D

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boblemon October 24 2011, 11:02:34 UTC
Thanks very much! I'll do my best!

There's definitely more to this than just free for all sex, yes, obviously more so than the first one, since they're all together. Nino was pretty involved this time, and he randomly confessed to Sho, who probably would have been more surprised if it had been any other time, lol. I'm sure he'll remember later and suddenly freeze in the middle of whatever he's doing. XD

I'm still not entirely sure if I'll write another one, but after a few other people's suggestions I was wondering if I should do something farther in the future... But I won't be able to unless I get some inspiration anyway. We'll see. ^__^;

But, thanks for your comment and opinion! <3

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