Just Another Love Story- Part 3

[boblemon]

Title: Just Another Love Story- Part 3
Rating: R/NC17
Pairing: Matsuken/Nino
Disclaimer: I guess Johnny’s technically owns Arashi, huh? Not me.
Summary: Just when he had given up trying, Nino manages to find love.
Note: Not betaed. Also, someone just subbed the video here at arashi_on of the two of them in L.A., which is what this chapter is about.

Part 1

Comments

[amyra95]

Woohoo the last chapter of this~~

I love how you describe every detail beautifully, and yet still understandable

Btw, I know this is from a stranger but, oh well. Happy Birthday! May you have another wonderful year of life :) (which is remind me that today is also my lil bro's birthday)

[boblemon]

I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for your nice comment and for reading too! And for wishing me happy birthday! :DD

[platinum28]

I was just telling my friend about this fic yesterday arvo, what timing! <3 This is brilliant, everything is conveyed so well I could be watching them with my own eyes as far as I know, haha. I have the urge to read it again straight from the top, I enjoyed it that much. :D

Were you conciously tweaking your writing style in this chapter too? It seemed pretty flawless to me and flowed quite naturally, so I don't think there's much to worry about in regards to it being difficult to read like you mentioned in the previous chapter. :)

Thanks so much for sharing, I'll definitely come back to read it all again in the future. :D

[platinum28]

And I almost forgot,

Happy Birthday!! Wishing you another healthy and pleasant year ☆

[boblemon]

:DD I'm so happy you enjoyed this story! I also enjoyed writing it, what with them being so cute and lovey in real life too.

In this chapter... Honestly, I wasn't very conscious of my writing style. It was more like I wanted to write it before I lost motivation to finish the last paragraph (which has happened before unfortunately =A= ). So maybe it was a mesh of both of the chapters together? Haha, I'm not sure. Maybe I should stop paying attention to it...

Anyway, thanks for your nice comments and insights. I really appreciate the time you put into them! And of course I'm glad you read it in the first place and for wishing me a happy birthday! :D You're great!

[platinum28]

haha, yeah, that seems to happen with a lot of things... Like they say, strike while the iron's hot. Speaking of which, I should probably do the same. XD In any case, this chapter worked great for me, so whatever you're doing is good. >:D

The pleasure's mine, I enjoyed every second of it. :D

[fancyann1974]

this was AWESOME
what an outstanding ending to an outstanding story
thank you so much for sharing

"Happy Birthday"

[boblemon]

Thank you very much for your nice comment and for reading! ^_^

[ichi_toshimiya]

Hi dear... Sorry I'm late saying this but happy b'day dear... *hug*

Yeiy finally you updating...
But to sad to know it would be the last...
But, Matsuken so much here....
How he can protected my brat so much, andhow he love him no matter what...

Yes even Nino said that at the end he gonna still choose Arashi over them, but I know they would manage it...
Somehow,... XD

Thanks for this dear...
Love it...
See you again... ^-^v

[boblemon]

Thank you for reading and your nice comment and wishing me happy birthday! ^_^

Yep, Matsuken will protect Nino no matter what, I think, so don't worry. Somehow I couldn't write this without Nino choosing Arashi over him, but maybe they can make it work out. :)

[ichi_toshimiya]

Yes I don't why...
But somehow I know they can manage that... XD

[fly_out]

thank you! it was long and great. >.<
now its your 'fault' that I love this pairing.~
happy birthday to you, too!!! <3
nevertheless, I wish matsuken all happiness with koyuki-chan. x3

[boblemon]

Haha, that was my intention~ :P I like this pairing a lot, so I wanted to spread the love.

Thank you very much for reading and your comment! Maybe Nino made the second cake because he was jealous. ^_^;