Another World Behind Shaded Lenses

May 14, 2009 09:23

another world behind shaded lenses
why are you squinting? in which brennan is smart as usual and booth has a... condition. bones. temperance brennan, seeley booth. pg. 230 words. for the_vintage. one of my few feeble attempts at dialogue.

another world behind shaded lenses )

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the_vintage May 15 2009, 00:18:01 UTC
That was so cute! And I loved your dialogue - I think you got them just right. Thanks so much! :)

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cartography May 15 2009, 05:51:44 UTC
Thank you, I'm relieved. I haven't written dialogue in ages and I've never been good at it, so I'm very happy you think so. :)

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buffyangellvr23 May 15 2009, 02:52:06 UTC
lol nice :) He could get contacts instead btw.

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cartography May 15 2009, 05:52:38 UTC
Thank you!
I know, I struggled with that bit, too, but then decided to just leave it out completely because a friend of mine wanted to have a drabble with the prompt "glasses", and I thought I'd focus on that. ;)

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