"Pas de Deux" (1/5): Firefly fic

[sagedarkwoods]

Title: Pas de Deux
Author: sagedarkwoods
Rating: R
Pairing: Jayne/River
Disclaimer: Firefly and related characters are the property of Joss Whedon and Mutant Enemy. This is a piece of fiction not intended for profit, only for entertainment.

Notes: Set a bit after Serenity.

Summary: Written for gilove2dance for 2008’s serenity_santa. River dances alone, until she

Comments

[losyark]

I'm so happy to see this go up online! It's very touching, and really showcases your own familliarity with dance. Sweet and dangerous and a little bit dark; loved it!

[the_woods_]

I love how you have two separate tones of narration to match Jayne and River...brilliant !

And can I just comment on how beautiful that last paragraph is ? :3

-n