Comments | sage_laurel: At the Feet of the Prince (Loki/OFC, NC/17), Chapter 2

sage_laurel

At the Feet of the Prince (Loki/OFC, NC/17), Chapter 2

May 23, 2012 22:56

Chapter 2

Blood rushing in Brynja's ears drowned out the murmurs of the crowd as she ascended the dais and came to stand before the royal family. Panic rose in her throat - What am I expected to do now? Not being of age before this year, she had skipped the selection of Thor's handmaid and thus had no clue of the protocol. Blood colored her face ( Read more... )

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djarum99 May 24 2012, 05:40:38 UTC

*flails*

I'm so happy to see a new chapter! This is beautifully written, and I'm totally hooked. You've done full justice to Loki (and you're just getting started), and Brynja is clearly drawn, sympathetic, and a wonderful protagonist.

There must be a Thor fandom on LJ, yes? And of course an Avengers fandom as well. You must post this everywhere. I love it ♥

sage_laurel May 24 2012, 13:57:25 UTC

Thank you! I value your input most highly and I love that YOU love it. I am enjoying writing this. I have posted to the Avengers forum but not much feedback there. We shall see...
What are YOU up to these days, Milady?

djarum99 May 24 2012, 22:48:59 UTC

I am up to RL in spades, and writing Once Upon A Time fic, and pursuing my Robert Carlyle fangurlish interests. The OUAT fandom exists mostly on Tumblr, which makes my brain hurt, but there is good!fic posted on AO3 as well.

Hope all is well with you and yours ♥

enigmabutterfly June 1 2012, 04:29:35 UTC

I absolutely love this! Please update soon!

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sage_laurel October 28 2012, 03:33:36 UTC

I'm so sorry darlings - I'm working on it bit by bit but life has been a mess lately. My mother is terminally ill and I've been taking care of her as her mental state has deteriorated more and more. I'm so sorry to keep you waiting! Its being written!

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sage_laurel October 29 2012, 00:41:59 UTC

Thanks for the note love :) I am in the USA and I have a sister near who is able to help a bit, but she's battling drug addiction at the same time as all this. My mother is thankfully able to do a lot of things for herself but she has a permanent feeding tube in her chest that must be cared for/changed frequently, and she gets sepsis a lot from it and spends much time in hospital. I have a much younger sibling still in school, so she needs care as well when Mom isn't doing well. Writing is a great pleasure for me, so I am trying to carve out time to do it more and more. I have my novel at a standstill right now as well, so I need to get cracking on that as well. Thank you for reading and for caring :)
xoxoLaurel

soleilpirate May 18 2013, 03:20:26 UTC

Oh my God, I was searching tonight for Loki fanfic and found this, almost by accident. But I don't believe in accidents and I LOVE THIS SO MUCH! I don't care for Loki/Thor, and OC's are rare in the fandoms I've been in before, and oh, this is SO GOOD! I'm intrigued by your characterization of Loki; it's so good and so true and so INTERESTING! And I love how you've set up this world they are both caught in, and how they are now bound to each other, and her INTEREST in his sexuality is wonderfully portrayed! Oh honey. I hope you write more of this, and SOON! I'm starving for more! Bravo, thanks so much for writing this! I will be watching for more, I'll be friending you in hope!