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Apr 04, 2008 19:49

TITLE: In His Mind
AUTHOR: Saga Chriztine
FANDOM: POTC
PAIRING: Jack Sparrow/William Turner
GENRE: Slash
TABLE: 12_stories Table 5 - Light
PROMPT: # 6 Pleasure
RATING: NC-17
WORD COUNT: 543
SUMMARY: The Captain watching and dreaming of what pleasure he can have with the blacksmith.
WARNINGS: None.
DISCLAIMER: I don't own these ( Read more... )

fandom:potc, character:jack sparrow, character:will turner, challenge:12 stories

Comments 8

rose_melody2 April 4 2008, 18:00:08 UTC

Oh, Jack's imagination is very active... ;)
I loved it!

sagas_stories April 4 2008, 18:19:19 UTC

Thank you.

inwe_saralonde April 5 2008, 02:33:25 UTC

Now I'm rather curious to find out whether Will has just an active imagination as Jack. Very nice!

*hugs*

sagas_stories April 5 2008, 05:32:12 UTC

There might come a story one day to tell if Will's imagination is as active.
Thank for reading.

klear0bsession April 5 2008, 05:21:52 UTC

This is a great idea, but I think you should seriously consider finding a beta. I am paying more attention to grammar than to the story.

sagas_stories April 5 2008, 05:28:49 UTC

Thank you that you find something good. I have got this betad, but recently I've got bad luck to find anyone that seem to reach up to some expectaions, espacially when I know that I have problem with the grammar after that I'm writing in a second language and have dylexia.
I always happy to get someone that would want to help me.
So sorry that yu paied more attentin to grammar in the story.

klear0bsession April 5 2008, 05:48:17 UTC

There is no need to apologize. You write a lot, and I think going over your stories with a good beta will simply make them better. I actually didn't know that you were writing English as a second language, that makes a big difference... and in that case I would actually say you have a pretty good grasp of the language. Better than some writers that have English as a first language. Also, I actually have dyslexia myself, so I understand the struggles it can create ( ... )

sagas_stories April 5 2008, 08:06:22 UTC

I will definitely continue to write, as that I do read a lot both over internet and also books. Latest time/months I have fall for Sherrilyn Kenyons Dark-Hunter series and those isn't available in my native that is Swedish.

You should have seen my English before 2000, that one was far from good and I do work on to hope to get better. One thing I really have detect that the dyslexia do to you not when it is about the spelling, it take a long time to get the grammar to be the correct. As also to see the differences it is to use sentence building between the language. It is often it isn't the same, which sadly (for me) mix the flew of the story.
Would I not continue I certain would not either learn to be better. writing fan fiction has really helped me a lot and it is a much more fun way to learn than use a textbook.

I do hope that you want to continue to read my stories...