The Red Door

Oct 29, 2006 20:44

The Red Door
(or, a Postmodern Prometheus)

Chapter 15: Johnny B. Goode )

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percysowner October 30 2006, 04:13:43 UTC
Wow, what a seamless transition from the Garden Room to the dream world! It really took me a moment to realize what had happened. I can't believe you can wrap this up in one chapter, but I'm sure it will be a doozy of a chapter.

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saffronhouse October 31 2006, 20:15:26 UTC
I sicerely hope the final chapter lives up -- at least in part. Thanks for the confidence!

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kshapiro October 30 2006, 04:16:51 UTC
I love this story, and I can't wait for the final chapter. This one was so good! And really freaky!

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saffronhouse October 31 2006, 20:17:15 UTC
Most excellent! Freaky is good.

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tingler October 30 2006, 04:20:03 UTC
You must be used to this by now, but--

Waaaauuuuggghhh!!!!!!

(and y'know, I had actually considered the "McFly invented rock-n-roll" conundrum before)

(Love the dream house, btw)
(also love John's not having anything to map his new relationship on and, ultimately, not caring)

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saffronhouse October 31 2006, 20:08:49 UTC
Yeah - it's just a throw away gag, but given (among so many other factors) the exploitation of black artists and race relations at the time -- yeeowch. Not a very funny one.

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ratcreature October 30 2006, 04:34:53 UTC
I really like how they just kind of slide into the virtual reality, which btw is even creepier now with that attic and mirror.

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saffronhouse October 31 2006, 20:00:27 UTC
Alleged grown woman that I am, attics and mirrors in the dark still freak me the f* out.

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fanofall October 30 2006, 05:06:21 UTC
I've just been bouncing along, happily oblivious, "lalala nice story lala", until WHAMMO you smack me one. This is so excellent, and I'll be sad to see it end (but I can't wait to see what happens)!

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saffronhouse October 31 2006, 19:58:22 UTC
Really appreciate your hanging around for this!

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