Comments | saffie_lew: Fic: A Little Bit Happy

saffie_lew

Fic: A Little Bit Happy

Jan 30, 2011 23:30

Title: A Little Bit Happy
Fandom: Torchwood
Pairing: Jack/Ianto
Rating: PG13 (Implied rather than shown)
Spoilers: Set pre-series
Warnings: None
Word Count: Around 1500
Disclaimer: I own nothing.

Authors Note: For the Emotion:Happiness square on my Kiss Bingo. Longer than I expected and also less happy. Hmm...

( Ianto Jones was just his type. That was not, as Suzie often suggested, anyone with a pulse or, as Owen stated, pulse optional. )

Comments 18

bluelilacs April 30 2011, 04:54:19 UTC

This had the perfect flow to it, from one scene to the next. The voices were all spot on. Great story.

saffie_lew April 30 2011, 09:37:37 UTC

Thank you. I was a bit worried about the flow, it felt a bit jumpy to me in parts so I'm pleased that you liked it.

lone_star_woman April 30 2011, 06:58:35 UTC

This is such sweet, lovely Jack POV. It breaks my heart to think of what will happen.

saffie_lew April 30 2011, 09:40:12 UTC

Thank you. I prefer not to dwell too much on what happens. Not sure if I'm going to watch the next series yet, I don't like what they've done to Jack's character. I could have probably dealt with Ianto's death if they'd done it better, but Jack had shown that he was loyal to his people and I can't believe he would do something like that.

badly_knitted April 30 2011, 17:00:30 UTC

Like this a lot, even at this point Ianto has a sort of understated cheekiness and I can see him being willing to try out alien sex toys - providing he gets to clean them properly first, he does like things nice and clean!

saffie_lew May 1 2011, 16:51:14 UTC

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.

Hee! :) hazelayes April 30 2011, 18:06:18 UTC

Very nice! Loving your voices - they're very good. I enjoyed Ianto surprising Jack like that, it's very 'him'! I hope you write more TW.

Re: Hee! :) saffie_lew May 1 2011, 16:53:35 UTC

Thank you. I'm glad you liked the voices. I would like to write more in Torchwood, but I'm terrible at getting things written.

lilferret May 4 2011, 06:56:30 UTC

Heheheh, oh Ianto.