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trail0ftears in saffic

New here and Story

Jan 04, 2005 16:15

Hello, I am new at the community. My name is Brittany. I am 18 years old from Ohio. I have been writing slash for 3 years. Femme slash is something I have just begun recently, but plan on doing much, much more of. Well, I hope to get to know all of you and read some wonderful stories.

Title: Fearless
Fandom: Law and Order:SVU
Pairing: Olivia/Alex
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svu, law and order

Comments 3

gauzy_recherche January 7 2005, 04:13:41 UTC

That was amazing!

trail0ftears January 7 2005, 20:38:32 UTC

Thanks, glad you liked it. :)

projectcop January 22 2010, 16:34:40 UTC

Well, that was different. It was really good at the beginning (despite some bad procedural errors). I tried to suspend my disbelief when you got to the part about Olivia taking her clothes off, but still wearing her weapon (attached to ????), but when you got to the part where she stuck the weapon in her mouth....No one trained in weapons would do this. Was it unloaded? Olivia carries a Glock, so pointing it at Alex which again, no one trained in firearms would do, it wouldn't click more than once. It's a semi auto.

It's too bad, because your writing was actually quite good. I'd love to see something else of yours.