Christmas story - Day 2 through Day 7

Dec 07, 2008 23:39

Kakashi decided that Ibiki had nothing on Jack Frost.  Sure Ibiki had torture techniques and awesome jutsus but that damn little sprite had a way of making it so your toes would never be warm again.  He swore that the creature was actually merrily sucking away on them and while Kakashi may not mind that in the whole sense of someone sucking on his ( Read more... )

24 days of christmas, fanfiction

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saelani December 8 2008, 15:53:09 UTC
well...he bought groceries and something special for the dogs in this one. As for the other thing...eventually.

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vescas December 8 2008, 09:21:14 UTC
I saw at least one off spot, but other than that they're all lovely!!

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saelani December 8 2008, 15:53:54 UTC
which off spot? I should fix it quickly. lol

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vescas December 8 2008, 15:56:09 UTC
second to very last paragraph, last story

Kakashi felt it burning a hole in his pocket, just itching for him to get up the courage to say something to the man.

The 'it' is undefined, unless I'm reading it wrong again XD

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saelani December 8 2008, 15:56:59 UTC
nope. it is the same it throughout that no one knows what Kakashi is giving iruka.

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achillona December 8 2008, 11:36:17 UTC
very nice... looking forward to more.

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saelani December 8 2008, 15:54:47 UTC
thank you.

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lynn_sensie December 8 2008, 15:53:37 UTC
these were funny, sweet and endearing all at the sametime look forward to more

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saelani December 8 2008, 15:55:08 UTC
i am glad you liked them.

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alstarryn December 9 2008, 19:10:02 UTC
Woot. I can't wait for more days! I didn't notice this until today, sorry! I usually have my email tell me, but I've been away from my computer (school computers don't let you check your email) and so I couldn't see that this was here.

My favorite so far is day 6...dunno why. It was just really sweet. I kinda like how it's all Kakashi centric, but I sort of wish I knew how Iruka felt.

~Star

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