Dangerous

Jul 12, 2006 23:55

A/N still not quite happy with it, but can't think of anything more to do to tweak it.  The characters belong to Kishimoto sensei.  Except Kari, and well, I suppose she belongs to Sasuke.

Iruka sighed happily as he lay on the couch. Kari was sleeping on his bare chest in only her diaper. He wouldn’t give up the life he had with Kakashi, but there ( Read more... )

kakashi, iruka

Leave a comment

Comments 7

(The comment has been removed)

saelani July 13 2006, 17:15:40 UTC

(The comment has been removed)

saelani July 14 2006, 06:02:28 UTC
haven't written it.

Though if had to say, would be more along the lines of being in the wrong place at the wrong time when something that is unusual happens that makes you think. Like witnessing a violent crime firsthand that makes you question your own actions towards others.

hope that makes sense.

Reply


mija711 July 14 2006, 08:53:01 UTC
omg this started of funny and it was, kakashi being kicked threw the screen door adn down the balcony falling on Naru and Sasuke that made me laugh, and the cat tring to outdo Iruka cause he was envious of how smoothly he moved, oooh my that had me snorting, and poor Ruka..thinking he was an abusive bastid like that man..even knowing that if Kakashi had wanted to, he could of protected himself adn put some hurting on Iruka as well, but awwwwwww you had to love that part it was bitter sweet, but then you went and added the Iruka would let kakashi think he was in charge from time to time and then snickering when kakashi stripped as he hummed..that was hilarious...but I gotta say the best part was why there was so little domestic crimes in Konoha...female ninja's that had me busting a gut and soo wishing that was the case in RL lol, oh and the whole dont make me picture my parents having sex was so true and sooo funny, I thank you for that totally awesome read, cant wait for more of this, these kari one shot ficlets are hooking me in so ( ... )

Reply

saelani July 14 2006, 14:02:50 UTC
thank you dear,

I am enjoying writing them. Most of the time they are inspired by things that happen in day to day life at work or home and me sitting here thinking, I wonder how so and so would react to that. Then I have to write, but sometimes, like this one, they get away from me.

Reply


bassist08 July 18 2006, 18:20:11 UTC
Aw, that was such a good fic! I loved the Broken Angel lines...and this one!

"In fact, Iruka’s cat was slightly envious and would spend the rest of the night trying to emulate him."

*giggles*

Reply

saelani July 18 2006, 19:10:33 UTC
thanks, I am really glad you enjoyed it.

I am really enjoying writing these one shots.

Reply


(The comment has been removed)

saelani February 5 2008, 06:09:57 UTC
you know...i remember this comment and swore I replied to it. *glares at livejournal* and the Kounichi will never tell...but I am pretty sure that Shikamaru's mother was involved somewhere.

Reply


Leave a comment

Up