The Words of Marilyn Monroe

Feb 18, 2010 15:36

Title: The Words of Marilyn Monroe
Pairing/Group: JoonMi
Authors note: To weerainbow . Sorry it took me so long.. >_< I originally had a different fic for you but I have a writers block on it... =/ and don't know if I could ever finish it... its like 1000 words of nothing -_-;; so I wrote this one for you instead. Hope you like it <333
Summary: A wise girl ( Read more... )

✩ mblaq, ✩ joonmi, ✩ fic, ✩ kpop

Leave a comment

Comments 25

weerainbow February 27 2010, 13:45:09 UTC
I CAN'T BELIEVE I MISSED THIS!!! I was away from home at the time you wrote this and although I checked back a bit I missed this compltetely :( just as well I was having a rummage around today in communities!!
Must go read it now.
*blows kisses*

Reply

weerainbow February 27 2010, 14:10:08 UTC
Oh sweetie, thank you so much!!

It's so sad and tragic, and yet beautiful at the same time. I love the balance of feelings that you brought out in Mir, how he enters the relationship claiming not to feel anything (though I feel like he really does) and then falling so deep that he can't handle it if it's not real love. It hurts to know he walked away before giving Joon a chance because maybe, just maybe, the older boy might have felt the same way about him...I can only wish...
If only Joon would run after him and ask him to stay because he loves him.

You never cease to make me feel your words so deeply. The emotion is so strong and I'm sure my heartbeat must speed up and slow down in time with your characters!

That quote is a sad one I think...it may protect someone but yet, much like Mir it doesn't actually work out how it's meant to, and it blocks the possibility or real love.

*hugs you tight*
really, thank you so much for writing some JooMi for me!! ♥♥ ♥♥

Reply

sadnlonleyme February 28 2010, 13:58:29 UTC
>_< I was worried that you didn't like it or something. But i'm glad that you do. ^__^~~

I think if Mir just told Joon how he felt, everything would have been easier.. because I see Joon liking Mir back as well. But sadly, I like angst so no happily ever after for them lol.

-hugs back-

No problem <33 I'm glad that you like it. And thanks for always commenting~~

Reply


(The comment has been removed)

sadnlonleyme March 6 2010, 14:55:28 UTC
hopefully you are in a happier place now.

and thanks for commenting. I'm glad that you like it. ;D

Reply


i apologize for such a late comment. paralynx June 12 2010, 05:12:54 UTC
I have to say it, this truely is one of the best fanfics i have ever read of Joon/Mir.

And I'm sorry for such a late comment on this, but it was so touching- really it was.

Beautiful hands down, just like the rest of your work.

Reply

No need to apologize <3 sadnlonleyme June 17 2010, 19:12:12 UTC
jfhdskfhsf <3. thanks so much. thats such a great comment to get >_<. I'm so glad that you like it. Your comment made me smile. thanks for that ^_^

Reply


king24 March 4 2011, 06:22:15 UTC
WoW... That was quite sad... to think... he'll never know if Joon really did want something more... but you can't help what you feel... especially when you know you're being played... cuz Joon was playing him at the beginning... messing around with Seungho... either way... I loved it!!!

Reply

sadnlonleyme March 7 2011, 05:48:37 UTC
Yeah. That's life. =/ you can never be 100% of other people's feeling. Thanks for commenting. ^^

Reply

king24 March 7 2011, 17:34:23 UTC
True... I Know I can relate to it a little... but then again... who wouldn't be able to relate to something like this... You said it... It's life.

Reply


Leave a comment

Up