Sammessiah: Shouldn't have done that

May 28, 2008 02:14

I wasn't supposed to write this. Not with the bloody wrist. Though it was a curious two hours, what with getting the kids to bed and all...
Title: Shouldn't have done that
Rating: Um...PG-13?
Pairings/Characters: Sam, Dean, Lilith with a chorus of redshirts possessed, and couple random, minor canon characters
Warnings: Blood, gore, happy violence ( Read more... )

tj_smartz, oneshot, supernatural, fanfic, season 3, hugemind, fightfic, sammessiah

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sadelyrate May 30 2008, 22:33:02 UTC
*smishes you*

Thank you for reading!
When the Muse talks, I've learned to sit down and write. I'm just happy it turned out as well as it did! :)

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tj_smartz May 27 2008, 23:49:51 UTC
Oh wow. Sade, you have out done yourself. This is simply marvelous. Its everything I imagined and so much more. The momentum builts like a freight train hurdling down the line, faster and faster. The tension is visceral. I love the change of POV's. Its adds, expands, enhances not distracts. And the insight into Dean and Sam, where you took them, their depth and emotion is so tangible.

I'm in fits of delight here and the last paragraph:

Sam opens his eyes, the brush of lips on his forehead home and sanctuary and love all wrapped up together, a mess of yarn without an ending.

He reaches, watches as the half-dried spots of blood run together, mix with the freckles on his brother's face.

"It's over," he whispers into the thin air between their breaths. "It's just the beginning," Dean hears.

*dies a thousand happy glorious deaths*

Seriously - so, so wonderful. THANK YOU LOVE!

*smishes and kisses you to death*

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sadelyrate May 30 2008, 22:38:05 UTC
Thank You for requesting this in a the language the Muse understands! I'm just happy I could write a oneshot and just enjoy writing it...

The momentum builts like a freight train hurdling down the line, faster and faster.
That's what I wanted, and it makes me so very, very gleeful that it comes across! :)

I usually tend to stick with one POV, but this? The Muse was adamant. And I had preciously little control over it all... so to hear this fulfilled your request? *GLEE*

*twirls you*
*smooches you*

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tj_smartz May 31 2008, 01:22:27 UTC
Anytime babe. And you do know I mean that! Enabling you and getting wonderful fic for my efforts - I'm on board with that!

I'm stoked that you enjoyed writing it too. Its just a nice experience when it all just flows out, isn't it?

Seriously - this was perfect and so exact and wonderfully done. God I love your writing. I still can't thank you enough.

*dances with you*

*SMISH*

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sadelyrate May 31 2008, 20:50:53 UTC
*smishes*

Its just a nice experience when it all just flows out, isn't it?
It's the best kind of experience when the words just come, and the story resolves itself. Gravel and a couple of others have been the same.
Seems like the stories the Muse just gave me are the ones (of my own) that I tend to like...

As long as I can cause joy and happiness...
*HUGS*

My email went nuts last night, so if I don't answer comments on stuff other than my own posts... sorry. Haven't gotten the notification. *glares at email*

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thehighwaywoman May 28 2008, 00:03:12 UTC
""It's like flipping a switch," Sam whispers against Dean's sweaty skin one night. "It's like ripping the wings off a butterfly" is what Dean hears."

CHILLS. And it only got better from there (which is impressive, because that was damned awesome). *hands* Brutal, vicious, terrifying, and right.

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sadelyrate May 30 2008, 22:45:38 UTC
*bows*
Thank You for reading! :)

All the comments about switches and flipping them just have been going 'round and 'round in my head... and with everything butterflies stand for, I couldn't resist.
I'm happy you liked this.

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sadelyrate May 30 2008, 22:46:16 UTC
Thank You for reading!
I'm happy it pleased you. :)

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bowtrunckle May 28 2008, 04:48:20 UTC
Nahhhgahh. BOYS! Wonderful.

That's all I'm capable of at the moment because I'm busy imagining the boys TOGETHER and Dean out of Hell. *floats off to the happy place*

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sadelyrate May 30 2008, 22:49:32 UTC
Thank You for reading!

*covers ears*
LaLaLaa! There's no place like Hell! There's no such thing as meathooks!

Sam's with Dean. Yes. Lilith Lightshow™ failed and the boys were both saved by a literal Deus ex machina... ergo, we'll finally be seeing angels and folks in S4.
Yes.
That's how it happened.

*joins you in the happy place*

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