Murmaider

[sabrelioness]

Title: Murmaider
Fandom: Metalocalypse
Warnings: F//guitar riff//king censored swear words and violence.
Summary: The band meets a beautiful and mysterious beauty who enchants Toki.

Toki shouldn't love things.

I am a very sick person.

Comments

[tod_hollykim]

You really should put this under a LJ cut.

[sabrelioness]

I was desperately trying for about ten minutes. LJ's giving me nothing but crap today.

[tod_hollykim]

Ummm..... have you tried highlighting the story and then clicking the LJ cut icon? Sometimes that's the only way. But, yes, LJ can be a pain sometimes.

[sabrelioness]

I got it finally, but it didn't want to cooperate.

[wildwelsh_witch]

you are a sick person……and s'why I like you and your writings.

I lol'd at this. I can actually see this being an episode, lol ^^

[karazephryn]

This is made of awesome... And yeah, this could totally be an episode. ^^

[endgamer]

XD

You nailed it, right down to the accents and extra esses. Superb.

[delaese]

::Cries.::

[sabrelioness]

o0

I thought you'd approve of 'death to Mary Sues'. Was it that bad?

[delaese]

No, I just feel bad for poor Toki. :-)

[sabrelioness]

Ah! Yeah, poor Toki. Someone needs to make him an immortal playmate; otherwise he'll just keep killing them.